|Reviews for Equation|
| little miss jolie chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
OMFG I LOVE THIS! Touko acts so different, so unique compared to the other fics I've seen out there. And I was sniggering to the dirty humor the entire time. XD what i like is that their interaction is ADORABLE, but not gaggingly cheesy.
| uh chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
i don't know what happened but it was funny
| Ding chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Simply lovely! I like how N's personality jeer toward the smart side, but honestly I don't think White would act like that at all.
| zaraki255 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
math porn... thats gold.
i really enjoyed reading this
| AKAAkira chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Now this was a neat little piece.
The cussing seemed awkwardly placed, the math doesn't appear to hold up on quick pen and paper (which is all I have, so I only know it has those x / 0 and y / 1 things that I forgot the technical name for, and that y goes to infinity and negative infinity while x gets closer to zero...), and personally I think N would be more into the arts than math (him being extremely intimate with Pokémon and all). But, Whitlea (White?) was creatively utilized (hearts infinity...heh), and the overall flow of the story was very well done - I especially liked that bubble gum bit. And, of course, the kiss was timed perfectly.
Overall, a nice fluff story.
| Reaperoftthenight chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
This was really well-written. Short, but sweet. And-oh my goodness!-it was so in character! White was great, and N was perfectly... N, instead of his usual mis-portrayed self in other fanfictions. I absolutely loved it :)
This is a little weird to ask, but... Do you think it'd be okay if I did fanart for this? Well, a fan comic. I really liked it, it'd be fun to draw, I think. Well, I mean, I might not even do it, but I figured to ask permission just in case...
| MSND chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
This is the best written N/Whitlea fics I've ever encountered. Truly a gift to the Pokemon fandom! :)
| Laxies chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
| misaki-chan-usui chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Legendary story. Lol, great job, I love Whitlea's attitude haha :D Keep it up!
| douchemasterr chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
This was fucking retarded. I don't know if you just love writing profanities but touko/white/whitlea placed her cuss words in the most awkward spots it just sounds unintelligent.
| Chocolatheque chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Absolutely in love with your Touko/White/Whitlea/Hilda/FEMALE PROTAGONIST. I get so tired of seeing her depicted as a blushing, soft-spoken maiden. So I adore this coarser depiction of her. Love the nerdy, overly serious N too. Really great stuff :)
Also "Dem theorems and sexyfine postulates" is probably the best line I have ever read in a fanfic
| Legal Humor chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Aw! This was cute. D
| Lunaira chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
"Math probably got him off at night. Dem theorems and sexyfine postulates."
I LAUGHED SO HARD. Also, here, "If it isn't infallible, than," than should be then**
Other than that small mistake, this was flawless. Humorous, romantic, and full of Touko x N. Yeah, that's everything I love. XD
| Miheart Sundae chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
This is so cute! :3
| VictiniStar chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
This was great! I really like, in particular, the differences in the tone of their dialogue. It really made their different personalities pop.