Reviews for Always Running
Luna Luce chapter 4 . 8/4/2011
Niiiice. Sam is Bella's cousin, I can honestly say I didn't see that coming.
Luna Luce chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Great start. I love Bella being a physical as well as mental shield.
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 16 . 8/4/2011
love it

LadyofLight34 chapter 16 . 8/4/2011
More chapters plz!
gigipadaswan chapter 16 . 8/4/2011
Really good story! I love how Sam is related,that was unexpected and very cute. The major is very hot! Keep up the good work and can't wait for more!
Kathy Hiester chapter 16 . 8/4/2011
I like it. I am hoping that eventually they will merge. Good Chapter !
scareDcat chapter 16 . 8/4/2011
Poor Jasper ~ relegated to the side lines but obviously The Major is the best man for the job at this time x
Kim Ginsberg chapter 16 . 8/3/2011
Love it as always
writersarereaders chapter 16 . 8/3/2011
Loved it.

So tired right now. Going to bed.

But just wanted to say I enjoyed the chapter. Perhaps later on there can be a scene where Major shows Bella the same tenderness that Jasper does, when they are alone.

Please post more soon.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 16 . 8/3/2011
I love the Major but in this circumstance I think I prefer Jasper because he is so loving.

The Volturi aren't so happy being ordered around by the Major but they better get used to it because that's just the way it is.
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 15 . 7/27/2011
love it


love it

Princess Mishawaka chapter 15 . 7/25/2011
Jane deserved what she got and Bella did tear her apart really good. I would have also spit on her face. UGH I would have she is such a brat.

You write very good lemons and it's easy with Jasper since he is the god of war and as far as I am concerned god of sex too.
scareDcat chapter 15 . 7/25/2011
Nice to see jane get what she deserves for once xx
krystal214 chapter 15 . 7/25/2011
That was a masterfully handed out punishment fitting of Jane and some crazy hot dungeon sex. Awesome job! I would love a short pov of the brothers impressions of Bella, Jasper, Jane's punishment, the lust and/or noises from their playtime. All good stuff. Great job!
writersarereaders chapter 15 . 7/25/2011
Great chapter.

Please post more soon.
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