|Reviews for Substitution|
| heygraf chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
Well that took an unexpected turn x)
I loved it! It was really well written, I'm gonna check your other fics if you have any ;)
| anahi tezuka chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
was excellent and I love Dean of uke, after all also lost virginity Dean, jijiji congratulations and goodbye, I love very much. Congratulations.
| officespace chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Happy Super Late Birthday !
Awesome fic btw
| JuniorWoofles chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
This was amazing, I loved it so much.
| Post U Later chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
ROTFLMAO! Fucking Gabriel. XD
Okay That Was SO Fucking Hot! This Is Definitely Going In My Favorites! XD
| PiperRoseHalliwell chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
lol haha typical gabriel. Love the ending
| Alithe Cambre chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Gabriel, you sick bastard :) lovely story!
| Skarlettefox chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Best ending ever. This was incredible. :D
| ShakespeareIB chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
This is absolutely brilliant! It's so well written! Sweet and funny and awkward and adorable and reallyfuckinghot and I can't even get over how much I love this fic! Also, both Destiel and Sabriel just makes me extremely happy. I love the Winchesters with their angels, and I think you wrote all four characters very well!
| Katie chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I absolutely loved your story. I loved how realistic and well described the sex and their thoughts were. Totally drew me in completely and made their dynamic perfect.
A few things to possibly consider though? Simply using hair instead of mane. Pecs or chest instead of breast. Cock or dick instead of manhood(too cheesy/romance novel-y)/member. Making the declaration a bit less end-of-the-world-dramatic and more I-think-I-might-love-you-realistic. As well as making the Sam/Gabriel less intense. I mean, I love Sabriel but I think that the whole fic was canon based until it got to that part, I just don't see Sam pretty much declaring his love right after seeing he was back. It's inclusion kind of moved the fic from romance/canon-based to crack/humor. Which is good too, but I think putting it on a different chapter would have worked better.
Still great though. Apart from the few odd word choices this is one of the most engaging and realistic sex scenes I've read. Totally awesome.
| Sexy.Lil.Emo chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Dude! Yes! Perfect! So many cookies for you! So awesome! Satisfying my destiel heart with your lovely fluffy porn :D
| MondoCane1876 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Fantastic. All I can say.
| GrimmXEchelonXShipperXNut chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I love eager and virgin Cas. So smexy and adorable!
Great story, The Sabriel at the end caught me by surprise even though it was mentioned in the description.
| Destielonmydashboard chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
OMG IM DYING. It was soooo beyond good, it was AMAAAAZING. c:
| Perry123 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Loved the ending!