|Reviews for Two Years Later|
| JamesLuver chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I think you captured John's darker, wallowing side very well indeed, and you've really added a raw pain to this scene. The last two paragraphs were particularly good at highlighting this.
| E.Phoard chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Sometimes John scares me a little bit with his insistence on seeing the dark. I feel like our characterizations of him are very in tune with each other, and, hopefully, him. And what is it about Yeats and John? They go so well together.
| westwingnut221 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Beautifully done! Bates in turmoil is always juicy. Poor Bates. Poor Anna. So sweet and painful at the same time. Fantastic!
| TheShippyQueen chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Oh that was torturous and sad! Poor Bates!
I think though you captured his thoughts exactly, well done!
| StuckInThePast chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
*sniffle* That really was just beautiful, you captured John's dark side perfectly. Thank you for posting this!
| MinervaLorraine chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
| Seaweed Soap chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
This is unbelievably incredible. I am in awe - well done.
| nkurej chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
If you haven't just hit on Mr. Bates' dark and injured side, no one can. Very well done-and just like him! Thanks.
| SyfyRomantic chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Awww, sad. I hope he realizes that Anna is not punishment, but a gift. I hope you continue with this.
| PrettyDarkEyes chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Wow, very powerful! Excellent look into the window of Bates' soul. Great touch with the Yeats poem. Please write more!