Reviews for Two Years Later
JamesLuver chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I think you captured John's darker, wallowing side very well indeed, and you've really added a raw pain to this scene. The last two paragraphs were particularly good at highlighting this.
E.Phoard chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Sometimes John scares me a little bit with his insistence on seeing the dark. I feel like our characterizations of him are very in tune with each other, and, hopefully, him. And what is it about Yeats and John? They go so well together.
westwingnut221 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Beautifully done! Bates in turmoil is always juicy. Poor Bates. Poor Anna. So sweet and painful at the same time. Fantastic!
TheShippyQueen chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Oh that was torturous and sad! Poor Bates!

I think though you captured his thoughts exactly, well done!

:D xx
StuckInThePast chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
*sniffle* That really was just beautiful, you captured John's dark side perfectly. Thank you for posting this!
MinervaLorraine chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Seaweed Soap chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
This is unbelievably incredible. I am in awe - well done.
nkurej chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
If you haven't just hit on Mr. Bates' dark and injured side, no one can. Very well done-and just like him! Thanks.
SyfyRomantic chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Awww, sad. I hope he realizes that Anna is not punishment, but a gift. I hope you continue with this.
PrettyDarkEyes chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Wow, very powerful! Excellent look into the window of Bates' soul. Great touch with the Yeats poem. Please write more!