|Reviews for Disclosure|
| CAR chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
Your story is excellent and your writing superb. Please keep going!
| Miss Nowhere chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
Jane stood to leave but was stopped as Nonna spoke again, "Janie, just remember Nonna's not getting any younger."
"Haha," Jane laughed, "You're worse than Ma." - (that made it ! So good am funny ) ;) keep it up !
| Transylvanian chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
Great story so far.
| herlovethawedthefrozenheart chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
I suppose I should have expected that from the father.
Frankie hearing them (lololololol) and nonna giving Jane the rings (awe) almost made up for it though.
| heatwave16 chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
Excellent...sad about the church, but unfortunatly that is the way things are. I do love this story
| ShadowCub chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
Jane shouldn't worry about the catholic church, there's a scrooge
Her Grandmother is right, she needs to ask Maura the question.
| Rach5 chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
beautiful short chapter.
harsh about the priest though, wonder if Jane will mention it to her family or Maura. i could actually picture that in vivid detail tbh. Great writing :)
| thetamarine chapter 21 . 4/13/2011
Ok, I really really really love Nonna.
I was raised Catholic, its horrible how hypocritical organized religion is. I went Maura's route... Agnostic!
| GSRCSILVR25 chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
awww...that was really cute! and i loved how the moms talked. another excellent chapter!
| saya4haji chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
ah loved that chapter. christmas eve between the parents..its like peace negotiations between two waring countries. deadly weird. Got to love it.
thanks for the update.
| ShadowCub chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
Kudos (I hate that word) to Angela on handling the witch.
| Transylvanian chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
Good story so far.
| herlovethawedthefrozenheart chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
I'm glad they are getting along. Can't wait for Christmas part 2
| heatwave16 chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
| worstliarever chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
lovely. It's nice to see the family getting on after all that drama.