|Reviews for Glass Skin|
| Margie22 chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
So awesome and so funny. I love it! (:
The relationship between Cassiel and Ashan has interested me a bit, the kiss makes me wonder about their past together. This story is great like the others you've written, you have a great writing style.
| I want to be Jesse's girl chapter 2 . 3/7/2011
Hahhah...okay this is officially the best fic you have written...totally going on my favourite list. Poor poor Cassiel, so humiliating - at least the girl experiences what us humans have to deal with on a regular basis.
The conversation between her and Ashan just made me laugh - did we, did we...do what Cassiel...but then often even those who know the term feel too embarrassed to state it out loud really - but in this case it was the lack of knowing the term that was hilarious...
And poor Ashan (I really like him here by the way) did not refuse Cassiel when she begged him to sleep with her...how happy obliging and so not Ashan - does bring forth the whole - does Ashan have feelings for Cassiel and all. Ofcourse the fact that he didn't pull away when she kissed him would hint at that...and the fact that Cassiel kissed him would hint that she does feel...something for him...I mean alcohol lets your self-control lose so you lose your inhibition which usually would prevent you from doing what you would like to do, etc. etc.
Loced the whole awkard moment with David when he was like "Breakfast is ready" - I wonder though whether they presume Cassiel and Ashan have done the deed or what...although I didn't think so...
Hahah...and ofcourse the declaration "I've never getting drunk again" - I mean Cassiel does like being in control and all and practically everyone says that after their first hangover...
Hahah...this fic is just hilarious...I love how you got all your character totally spot on...like Jo reminding Cassiel that "it was worth it" coz she kissed Ashan and all...that's Jo all over attempting to cause trouble and all...but then to be fair I would have done the saem thing and then he whole crying like a baby thing too...
YOu have written an absolutely fabulous fic so BRAVO...totally loved this fic
| I want to be Jesse's girl chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I don't think that you have done a Jo POV before but you do write her character to the T. BUt then I shouldn't be surprised really, you manage to do that with pretty much every character in the WW books...
Cassiel kissing Ashan...it seems to be the day...Wow and Ashan ofcourse doesn't know how to react to it which is absolutely befitting considering that Djinn (well the Old ones who weren't human) don't really know how to react in human skin and to human skin for that matter - as seen in the Undone or was it Unknown when Cassiel is feeling all hot and bothered by Luis.
I do like the ending a lot actually...I mean it shows her vulnerabilities coming forth - unable to comprehend how a Djinn such as herself has to land in the lowly posiiton of a human. And that happens especially after a bit explosive moment such as kissing Ashan (lol...his first time being kissed hahahah) and ofcourse intoxication will sometimes bring your vulnerabilities forth. Anyways what I'm trying to say is awesome job - will read the 2nd chapter now.