Reviews for Too Sudden
Bastet Goddess chapter 16 . 12/8/2013
Yayyyyyyyy! Happy ending for everyone! I was scared you were going to make it a tragedy, but you didn't! WOOT!
icearrows1200 chapter 16 . 6/27/2011
Very nice ending! I can't believe it's over! Anyway, I'm glad you wrote this and I hope you enjoyed my reviews! ;)
icearrows1200 chapter 15 . 6/27/2011
Yay! Magical stone!
icearrows1200 chapter 14 . 6/27/2011
You're right! CLIFFHANGER!
TMNT Redneck chapter 14 . 6/25/2011
Haha, you called Amy a dog! Yay, they love each other again! (Not that they ever stopped...) Please keep going!
icearrows1200 chapter 13 . 6/25/2011
Awww... poor Justin! He's so depressed! He's all dead inside! And his daughter! Ella should be ashamed that she is blocking him out! I hope those whores die! Nah, just idk
TMNT Redneck chapter 12 . 6/24/2011
Aaaw, pore Justin :,(. Pore Cynnie too, but mainly Justin. Really good, btw.
icearrows1200 chapter 12 . 6/24/2011
oh. my. noes. Timothy is going crazy! And o my noes to them being over! Please continue! I can't wait to see what the Zeta continu... whatever their called, says to Ella!
icearrows1200 chapter 11 . 6/22/2011
So, is she pregnant?
Kaname chapter 11 . 6/22/2011
Looks like Justin and Ella are gonna have a baby rouse! :D
icearrows1200 chapter 10 . 6/18/2011
Very nicely paced! I like the jelously of the Omicron Zetas. It's pretty funny. I hope they don't hurt Ella though. (I kinda hope they do so Justin can go all super rat on them and save Ella. ;)
icearrows1200 chapter 9 . 6/16/2011
What terrible kind of people are NIMH? Also, Helana is very creepy. I need another chapter!
icearrows1200 chapter 8 . 6/14/2011
Love the chapter title! You totally took advantage of uping the rating! I wonder if any jelously will spark between Jamie and Ella? Helana is quite an interesting character. I wonder what evil plots she will create? She reminds me of my zelda OC, Deborah. Anyway, I will be awaiting chapter 9 with greedy eyes!
icearrows1200 chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
Dun Dun Dun... I hope they use protection. They don't need more Cynthias! hehehehhehe good clifhanger!
icearrows1200 chapter 6 . 6/11/2011
Yay! I hope they stay! I also love Justin's witty remarks. More please!
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