Reviews for One Peice Cinderella
LuNa Forever chapter 9 . 5/12/2014
Sugoi!
IchiIchi chapter 9 . 8/17/2013
Update soon :D great story so far
Bookworm-ask-and-i'll-answer chapter 9 . 7/11/2013
:O wow
xXxEmeraldBlueXxX chapter 9 . 3/19/2013
I love this story! It's really nice and cute! Can't wait for more!
LunaMoonlight100 chapter 9 . 11/4/2012
Mooooooooooore!
Butterfree chapter 9 . 10/10/2012
"I've got it!" he exclaimed after five minutes, startling Nami a bit, "My name is Lawrence!"

PFFT, if Luffy ever really said that in the manga, I think I'd die from laughter... xD

I was smiling throughout the whole chapter at not only Luffy and Nami, but Shanks being such a sweet father. I also love the effort put into Luffy and Nami's conversation to make it 'them' rather than generic and sterotypical. I think the thing you need to work on that made you think you're not good at writing love scenes is putting more of their personalities into their love-related thoughts pertaining to the other. While their conversation felt like them, the thoughts and passages about falling in love was a tad lacking.

Great chapter and good luck writing! CupidKirby
1fairytaillover chapter 9 . 10/7/2012
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
carolina.saldana.735 chapter 7 . 10/7/2012
รจ molto bella storia spero che tu possa continuarla
scarletlovecharlie chapter 9 . 10/6/2012
damn i wish there was more PLEASE hurry with the next chapter.
i can't wait
scarletlovecharlie chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
Luffy can be my knight in shining armour any day. :) love the story so far
scarletlovecharlie chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
oooooh its getting exciting i was jumping like shanks and then stopped when the chapter did.
i can suprisingly read while jumping, huh, who knew? :)
scarletlovecharlie chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
i am liking this so far
elixluna chapter 9 . 10/4/2012
Great story :D never read one like and I was reluctant to read it but I decided to give it a try and well here I am c(: oh and I was kinda confused at the part where shanks slapped luffys back... Wasn't luffy hurt from the whips he received? Shouldn't he be in some kind of pain? Anyways igonore those last two statements c(: haha I just like reading luffy torture xp :) update soon (: bye bye :D
Skywaters chapter 9 . 10/4/2012
I know I'm being rude but... YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! Haha I'm kidding, update at your own pace but seriously please please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter. It's a awesome story ! Lol I wonder what sanji and stuffs reaction will be like? I hope it's hilarious!
creao chapter 9 . 10/4/2012
Genial! Continue it,please!
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