Reviews for Spider
SensiblyTainted chapter 6 . 5/21/2011
This chapter was the best. I can totally see a progression in skill as you continue this exciting story. I can't wait to see Dumbledore's reaction to all this. Did Beyond kill the girl or just make her pass out? I don't think murder will be excused quite so easily.
Dennisthepinkgoldfish chapter 6 . 5/20/2011
yaaay! they will never be seperated!
Felixis chapter 6 . 5/20/2011
Oh, Wendy, Wendy, Wendy, that was just one of the worst things you could of tried... And now you know that. Of course, you might just be dead, so...there isn't much of a point in knowing that now.

-facepalm- Draco, when you are slammed into a wall, that's when you stop. Not try again a few more times. Idiot.

And Beyond, I think the reason you were allowed on the bed was because you are the son of Voldie. Harry, though, I... have no idea. Because of his parseltongue? Eh. Oh well.

Quick question, is that Salazar Slytherin in the portrait?

Also, is Harry going to stay in that room, or is another Hufflepuff going to attempt to drag him off? And is he going to be one of those outcast-of-sorts, due to his lack of conversation with his house, or the fact that he doesn't even sit with them to eat?

Great chapter, abit faster-then-usual to read, but still excellent.

But, seriously, is Wendy dead, 'cause then I would be rather surprised that Beyond already killed someone within his first day at Hogwarts. Not that shocked(When it comes to Beyond, you should expect things like this), but still just a bit surprised.

Lookin' Forward To Next Update!


P.S: Oh, and, I noticed one mistake. It's 'Crabbe' not 'Crabby'. Just wanted to tell you that before anyone else pointed it out :D
lil joker 1989 chapter 6 . 5/19/2011
oh this was a great chapter but I have to say I hope Wendy Percival isn't dead...
aliengirlguy chapter 6 . 5/19/2011
good chap! some grammer issues, replace 'bed' with 'couch' in reference to draco's final sleeping arrangement, but otherwise, well done.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 6 . 5/19/2011
I like it! **
ceres51892 chapter 5 . 5/16/2011
Wahaha! I've finally caught up again.

So... Yeah. *gets all dizzy thinking of the possibilities for this story* Huh.

I've got to say, I'm still torn on the relationship between Harry and Beyond! XD

On one hand, Beyond will put himself between Harry and everyone else, and I don't want Harry to be blocked from possibly having more friends and such... Not to mention Beyond's connection with Voldemort; I don't want Harry to be in danger. I don't want Beyond to be in danger either, but, you know what I mean?

But on the other hand, it's still oddly sweet, and they have grown up together and maybe it's just...right.

*sighs* Why are decisions so difficult?

Anyway. Harry's Sorting was quite scary. I guess he isn't totally unsuited for Hufflepuff, but, I don't think he's SO far off from being Slytherin... I guess it depends on how you view everything though. Hunh. Still, when he called out Beyond's name like that... I got shivers.

It was a bit terrifying. XD At least Beyond was able to calm him down after that, but still. What will they do, being in different Houses? Beyond makes it sound simple, but I don't think everyone else will just let them do that either... Maybe they can help break down House boundaries! XD

Also, Quirrell. I don't like him! I do wonder what will happen though... So, in this story, Voldemort will not be attached to the back of his head?

Good luck with writing!

32323232323 chapter 5 . 5/15/2011
i love the super protective beyond iam really hoping to read more chapters!
daemonkieran chapter 5 . 5/13/2011
Dumbdumd is so self-delusional
KitaroJeevas chapter 5 . 5/10/2011
Please continue. I love this!
Dennisthepinkgoldfish chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
Harry and Beyond are sooo adorable! 3
sympatheticassassin chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
Wow! This is a unique story. Interesting plot set up so far. Like your character interactions and the responses to Beyond. Why did Voldie just leave his son in the Potter house? Hope Siri gets out of jail.
FallenHope-Angel chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
that was just so cute! and voldie's aliv! will he cme for beyond and take harrry wiht him? or will beyond oppose hm to protect harry i hve ti know! thouh ths chpater was awsome.
lil joker 1989 chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
nice chapter but I wonder if Beyond will hurt Quirrel for hurting Harry...and if he does I wonder how about it will be...well I guess I'll have to wait and see ]
Felixis chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
ffffff, excellent chapter as ever.

When you said you used several of my ideas, I decided to play 'Spot the ideas'.

So.. I found Dumbledore's reaction, the heir and lover deal, a kiss on the cheek and on the end of the lips, Minerva's shock, the black-red eyes deal except it turns black instead of red, some of Voldemort's reaction, the disgust...Did I get them all?

'There isn't anything to worry about', Really, Harry, like I said before, there is /nothing/ to worry about. Beyond /will/ find a way through the password and the wards. It doesn't matter how he will, just know that he /will/.

That was an excellent magic outburst description, by the way. It felt so detailed. I could clearly imagine all the items hovering, utensils floating posed to attack, people clawing at their throat,with Dumbledore just sitting there and watching curiously...

:sighs happily:

'Harry Potter, Boy-who-lived, wasn't gay at all.' Ahem. Yeah. Riiiight.. Are you having fun living in a state of denial, Dumbles?

Looking forward to next chapter If I get more ideas, I will send them to you


P.S: This fanfiction is now one of my top favorites, since it's one of the few fanfictions I check everyday more then once, to see if it's update. Just thought you'd like to know :D
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