Reviews for Hide and Seek
forgotten22 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
haha Turning a simple child's game into adult fun. Great job. That was a bit erotic and fun I'd say. I liked the lines "Is this what you seek?" and "I've been hiding in you all day, it's release I seek." Great play of words :) Also the him whizzing by her and making her more and more wet. :P Very nice! haha Great job and good luck!
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
BeCullen chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Naughty Edward. Good luck.
IrisDraven chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
So thought he was doing something like that lol
GLee68 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
bwahahaaha naughty Edward...

what a smexy little game, think I would enjoy housework if I had that kind of distraction/incentive!

Lutzisnutzforme chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Now thats a game I would like to play.
Lo21 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
So that's how vampires like their foreplay, that's sexy. Lol good job. :)