Reviews for The Real World
Guest chapter 4 . 11/25/2014
u need to make more chapters after the kids was born
jalin chambers chapter 2 . 11/23/2014
this is a great story u have a gift
kingofmonsters1 chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
First day at there new job look like it went great and I'm happy that Frida found a new work friend to help her along Kathy seems like a cool person and they Will get along while at work and I'm happy that Manny first thing he thinks about when he gets his first paycheck is to save it for a ring for Frida I proud of him and grand papi still trying to turn him evil hahahaha I loved it so much I can't wait to see what happens next to them
kingofmonsters1 chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Wall it was a great chapter I loved how Manny is doing everything he can to make her comfy even giving he the control of the tv and watching what she wants to watch I can't wait to see what happens next to them
kingofmonsters1 chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
First it was sweet Manny learning how to watch out for danger time of the day so to stare clear of them and starting thinking about purpose Frada and bumping in to her parents who drive her mad at not
Be ok with you and then his mom and dad try to help but ended up fighting them but Anita and Nikita tr y make them see reason with Rodolfo and Maria and Carmela did but Emiliano's just to staburn too
kingofmonsters1 chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
It was a great chapter it's good there taking this seriously and getting job and Manny should men up to porpoise to Frida already and hopefully get her dad to understand and escape it and com Frida down to try to get her mom to escape it so she could help her dad to too I can't wait to see what happens next to them all
kingofmonsters1 chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
Well I kind of excepted for her dad to freak but hopefully he will come around and her mom to I I'm happy that Maria was cool with it and helped her com down a bit and that Rodolfo was to and want to help them out to
kingofmonsters1 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
That was awesome I like it the party part was great and how she found out was good too and I loved how Manny maned up like that it was great I can't wait to see what happens next with them
A FELLOW WRITER chapter 29 . 12/24/2012
Well I have to say this story is quite impressive! I absolutely love it! The suspense, drama and romance. One of the greatest yet! I normally do not review or comment on many stories but, this one was absolutely beautiful! I loved watching the series when i was a young little girl in Mexico and now I am a big time writer of you for the story. Keep writing your friend
Guest chapter 25 . 8/27/2012
this is a nice project about sexual content and el tigre ! nc job keep working
Guest chapter 29 . 8/27/2012
omg so amazing
itsmeeeeeee chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
sweet! :D
CornerofRadical21 chapter 29 . 8/2/2012
such a good story! :D
somebody chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
good story
secret chapter 16 . 7/11/2012
i dont like zoe
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