Reviews for Second Chances
PhantasticTroyler chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Hehe I know you love us fangirlies :D great work, the very definition of awesome! Keep up the fantasticnessystuff :3
AlphaSilverLover chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
HOT! That's all there is to it. So steamy Alpha Pair. Loved it!
The Silverclaimer chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Always keep the Faith Mitsukai-kun..
You dont know how inspiring this is...

Nakuru Tsukishiro chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Wow. Just,,, wow.

It doesn't matter if you didn't write the smut all the way and I think that if you aren't comfortable writing it, then it's ok if you don't.

The point is, this fic was hot and painful and so full of feelings that I could read it over and over without getting tired.

You did a really good job!
kittaynumnums chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
i 3 this pairing sooo much! i 3 yukimura sooo much.. i wish rikkaidai was the main characters for prince of tennis
rebirthreborn chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Congratz for your first smut. A lot of intensity is going on here. It wasn't that bad really. Definitely there is room for improvement once you feel comfortable writing these kind of fics ;D
Faoiltierna chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I didn't feel that this story particularly needed to show any further :-) It was hot, it conveyed the plot, and the descriptions worked well...

I approve :-) (Of course that is nothing compared to your girlfriend's approval, but still, a warm fuzzy feeling is always good, right?)
demoncat13 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
nice job.
Sakura Ichigo Morihiko chapter 1 . 3/5/2011

Dylan: Ahem.

Me: I said boy. You're a ghost.

Dylan: ... dammit...
FlameAlchemist007 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I loved the variety of emotions in the story and how they progressed throughout the story. I also enjoyed Yukimura's internal struggle against what he thought he should do and what his heart wanted him to do.

Congrats on your first M-rated fic - you did a nice job :)

Happy Birthday Yukimura!
Alpha14 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Very good for a first M-rated fic. I'm wondering what happened between them that caused them to separate...

Can you say thanks to your girlfriend for me?
YukiKitsune103 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
OMG I LOVE YOU! (Not the literal way of course)

This is just seriously too great! *q*

Job well done for your very first smut! ;D

I really love the way you described their actions as well their feelings, they really reached into my core, allowed me to feel what they are feeling. It's really great! :D

Can't wait to see you write more!

P.S: Your girlfriend is lucky to have someone like you~ ;D
kanda kaoru chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Seiichi should be proud of you and your girlfriend :DD

Happy Birthday Seiichi-kaasan~ (overly impersonating akaya right here)