|Reviews for Second Chances|
| PhantasticTroyler chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Hehe I know you love us fangirlies :D great work, the very definition of awesome! Keep up the fantasticnessystuff :3
| AlphaSilverLover chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
HOT! That's all there is to it. So steamy Alpha Pair. Loved it!
| The Silverclaimer chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Always keep the Faith Mitsukai-kun..
You dont know how inspiring this is...
| Nakuru Tsukishiro chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Wow. Just,,, wow.
It doesn't matter if you didn't write the smut all the way and I think that if you aren't comfortable writing it, then it's ok if you don't.
The point is, this fic was hot and painful and so full of feelings that I could read it over and over without getting tired.
You did a really good job!
| kittaynumnums chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
i 3 this pairing sooo much! i 3 yukimura sooo much.. i wish rikkaidai was the main characters for prince of tennis
| rebirthreborn chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Congratz for your first smut. A lot of intensity is going on here. It wasn't that bad really. Definitely there is room for improvement once you feel comfortable writing these kind of fics ;D
| Faoiltierna chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I didn't feel that this story particularly needed to show any further :-) It was hot, it conveyed the plot, and the descriptions worked well...
I approve :-) (Of course that is nothing compared to your girlfriend's approval, but still, a warm fuzzy feeling is always good, right?)
| demoncat13 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
| Sakura Ichigo Morihiko chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
KYAAAAAAAAA! A BOY WHO WROTE YAOI! KYAAAA! *tackles you to the ground in a glomp* YOURE THE BEST GUY PUT THERE!
Me: I said boy. You're a ghost.
Dylan: ... dammit...
| FlameAlchemist007 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I loved the variety of emotions in the story and how they progressed throughout the story. I also enjoyed Yukimura's internal struggle against what he thought he should do and what his heart wanted him to do.
Congrats on your first M-rated fic - you did a nice job :)
Happy Birthday Yukimura!
| Alpha14 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Very good for a first M-rated fic. I'm wondering what happened between them that caused them to separate...
Can you say thanks to your girlfriend for me?
| YukiKitsune103 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
OMG I LOVE YOU! (Not the literal way of course)
This is just seriously too great! *q*
Job well done for your very first smut! ;D
I really love the way you described their actions as well their feelings, they really reached into my core, allowed me to feel what they are feeling. It's really great! :D
Can't wait to see you write more!
P.S: Your girlfriend is lucky to have someone like you~ ;D
| kanda kaoru chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Seiichi should be proud of you and your girlfriend :DD
Happy Birthday Seiichi-kaasan~ (overly impersonating akaya right here)