Reviews for Excerpts From the Diary of Bella Swan
Harrytrix4Ever chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
After reading one of your stories that I wasn't fond of, I decided to read some of your others in hope to find one I liked. And might I say, I like. A lot. Seriously. If the twilight books ended up this way, I'd collect every bit of merch I could find. I'd be Stephanie Myer's biggest fan. Nicely done!
Zephal chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Well this was creepy. I don't think I'm going to sleep any time soon...
Smashing Keyboards chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Well, shit. This was deliciously creepy. It would be totally awesome to see this fleshed out and written fully. I gotta say, though, I have one problem.

You don't have to read every single page of every single Twilight book in order to criticize a work, or write fanfiction about it, but the Bella from Twilight and the Bella in your story are at odds with each other. I'm not a fan of Twilight; I've never read the book, and though I've seen all the movies, it wasn't of my own volition. Pop-cultural osmosis can oftentimes lead to blatantly false information—or, in this case, a lack of information at all. Again, you don't have to read Twilight to write fanfiction about Twilight or to criticize Twilight. But it would be nice if you could do your research about it, because, again, your Bella and the canon Bella are at odds. A look at the Twilight character page on TVTropes and the personality section of Bella's page on the Twilight Saga wiki is all it takes.
Nomanic chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Wow. This was so much better than the book (which I read because I felt bad about making fun of it without ever having read it – I do not feel bad anymore). If it had been like this I would have watched this movie so many times...
jolynda chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Hi

I'm not here to disrespect you or anything but just to put the facts right.

Twilight was written as a love story not horror. It's of a human teenager falling in love with a vampire etc. etc.

You're probably not into love stories and that's ok, it's your choice but if you are I recommend that you give it a try, you might be surprised.

With that, have a nice day and God Bless

Lynda
Aista chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
My delicate sensibilities! No actually that left me quite satisfied. Thanks.
Hariti12 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
This is bloody creepy. After reading your 'writer's block' outtak of CoF, I CAN imagine you being as insane as this. God, what is wrong with you, woman?! HAHAHAHAHHAHAA. It's amusing to see Bella want to KNIT. :O
Manic Dogma chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
...O_O...

...eep...

I don't know what happened there, what Bella became, but I know that I haven't been that creeped out since...Christ, since I don't know when.

The mood whiplash from having just read the latest chapter of please don't eat the hell butterflies right beforehand probably didn't help '
LttH chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Woah... That was... Deliciously disturbing.
Acerya chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
From annoying 'Bella' Swan to Drusilla and ? Sorta Awesome.
VitaRose chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Oh...gh.. I nearly puked when she went after his eyes then brain (that is a good thing btw).

I'm usually not one for horror, thank you Dad for showing me Hannibal and The Shining before I was ten, but I couldn't stop reading this. That doll part reminded me of Drusilla. And now I feel so much more for Dru than Bella because Bella must have been just a bit deranged to fall for Edward, and Dru must have been so innocent once-upon-a-time for her to torture a, sort of, innocent Angel for his sins against her as a human...

Sorry for the rant, but that was all because this short brought out so much in me.
Delighted Laughter chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Holy fuck! This is so terrifying! Great story!
thelegendarysupernerd chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
NICE! : )
SassyMuse chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
The slow and gruesome change from normal girl to terrifying monster is brilliant done. This makes me slightly in love with a fandom that I detest. If this was actually what Twilight was, I would have been able to finish the book and watch the film without wanting to gouge out my own eyes and pull off my ears just to escape them.
Lucy's Echos chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
This is really neat, and dark, I love it. This also gives me a feeling of Bella turning into Drusilla from Buff the Vampire Slayer/Angel the Series. Loved it thanks for writing!

-Lucy
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