|Reviews for Excerpts From the Diary of Bella Swan|
| jolynda chapter 1 . 2/21
I'm not here to disrespect you or anything but just to put the facts right.
Twilight was written as a love story not horror. It's of a human teenager falling in love with a vampire etc. etc.
You're probably not into love stories and that's ok, it's your choice but if you are I recommend that you give it a try, you might be surprised.
With that, have a nice day and God Bless
| Aista chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
My delicate sensibilities! No actually that left me quite satisfied. Thanks.
| Hariti12 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
This is bloody creepy. After reading your 'writer's block' outtak of CoF, I CAN imagine you being as insane as this. God, what is wrong with you, woman?! HAHAHAHAHHAHAA. It's amusing to see Bella want to KNIT. :O
| Manic Dogma chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I don't know what happened there, what Bella became, but I know that I haven't been that creeped out since...Christ, since I don't know when.
The mood whiplash from having just read the latest chapter of please don't eat the hell butterflies right beforehand probably didn't help '
| LttH chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Woah... That was... Deliciously disturbing.
| Acerya chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
From annoying 'Bella' Swan to Drusilla and ? Sorta Awesome.
| VitaRose chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Oh...gh.. I nearly puked when she went after his eyes then brain (that is a good thing btw).
I'm usually not one for horror, thank you Dad for showing me Hannibal and The Shining before I was ten, but I couldn't stop reading this. That doll part reminded me of Drusilla. And now I feel so much more for Dru than Bella because Bella must have been just a bit deranged to fall for Edward, and Dru must have been so innocent once-upon-a-time for her to torture a, sort of, innocent Angel for his sins against her as a human...
Sorry for the rant, but that was all because this short brought out so much in me.
| Unctuous chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Holy fuck! This is so terrifying! Great story!
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
NICE! : )
| SassyMuse chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
The slow and gruesome change from normal girl to terrifying monster is brilliant done. This makes me slightly in love with a fandom that I detest. If this was actually what Twilight was, I would have been able to finish the book and watch the film without wanting to gouge out my own eyes and pull off my ears just to escape them.
| Lucy's Echos chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
This is really neat, and dark, I love it. This also gives me a feeling of Bella turning into Drusilla from Buff the Vampire Slayer/Angel the Series. Loved it thanks for writing!
| orkestrzhopa chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
oh my god yes
i would be the biggest twilight fan if it had taken this turn
| satrinity chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Holy hell, this is amazing. I'm one of those people that has read Twilight, and doesn't want to get into the whole debate on it. When I was younger, sure. It was awesome. I hadn't read very many good books, as in GOOD good books (I am now a happy Shakespeare/Poe/Steven King fan). I was blind to the numerous mistakes and plot/character development follies that were made. I love alternate storylines, and this is by far one of the best ones that I've seen for Twilight. (Save for the revenge fic that a friend of mine wrote. ;3 )
Great job! 10/10!
| Remi chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Hot damn! Such a pity Twilight didn't turn out to be something like this. It would have epic
| Freya chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
*Shudders* It's brilliant, and wasted by being in the Twilight catergory.