|Reviews for The Decision|
| Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
SOmeone mentioned this on Edwardville this morning and I'm so glad that I decided to take a peek- I love it! Your take on canon Edward's decision and subsequent actions is lovely, and those moments in the woods with Tanya are magic. His heartbreak, his loneliness, everything was so heartfelt and strong. I'm looking forward to more!
I loved this: "He shrugged out of his dinner jacket, letting it drop on the ground as he began to run.
His fingers worked the knot of his tie and it flew away. He rolled up his sleeves, opened the top buttons of his shirt and pulled its tails free. The soft cotton clung to his chest and billowed out behind him as he ran.
He let the wind whistle past his ears, muffling the music, sighs and whispered declarations of love which gradually faded and disappeared behind him.
The wind felt good against his face and in his hair and he didn't slow until he had crossed the border from Vermont into New Hampshire. In the quiet woods he sat on a fallen log and stared at the sky. He smiled when he saw her face smiling back at him from the stars." - Just beautiful images.
| Draed chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Awww, just a shor story ? That's too bad, I so enjoyed the first chapter... wouldn't mind reading 10 more of those...
| joayla chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I loved that beginning babes! Of course I will stick around for the next couple of chapters babe
| m7707 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Nicely done first chapter. You do a great job with the "what ifs" of canon. Purely enjoyable - thanks!
| BelleinWonderland chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I'm a fan of your stories, so I'm really glad you've started another one! :D This was a great first chapter, can't wait for the next one! :)
| afmtoo chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
thrilled to see you back. Love it, of course.
| 84gemstone chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Ok so I thought Bella would be renting his place but this works better :0)
| jdmom29 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Love it! I'm a fan of all your stories. I wish this story can be more that three or four chapters. Thank you for sharing.
| keyecullen chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Well I can't wait to see if Bella remembers him!
| darrah chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I love it. Please keep it to Edward's pov. I like it! Bella can remain a mystery. Anyway, it's your story. So glad you're writing another one. I love your what ifs. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
| eveneven chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I am happy you are back with a new story. I love it so far!
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Sue! You're back with goodies for us! I always knew I liked you ;-)
So excited to read more of this!
| sherryola chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Oh I love it. I love having a story from you again.
i enjoyed looking into edward's head and how he has actually grown over the past couple years. I enjoyed his talk with tanya and how he still sticks to his own values and desires. I enjoyed everything he thought and considered when he saw bella. I loved his attempts to be kind to his classmate.
very very nice.
| teambellaedward chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
| mommakat chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This is a really great beginning! Thank you for sharing and I cannot wait for the next chapter