Reviews for The Decision
Yali.Page chapter 7 . 10/24/2014
I always wondered why the Cullen's don't use make-up in order to look older and stay longer... They have all the money in the world, I'm sure they can figure out something.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, I'm really enjoying your writing style!
SmillaGW chapter 9 . 10/23/2014
What an absolutely wonderful story
EeWee chapter 9 . 10/22/2014
Beautiful wonderful story. No one channels Edward and Bella like you. I would love an epilogue of their future selves. How did he turn her, when, where, etc. What are they doing if you ever have a few spare hours...
Nelleke chapter 2 . 10/21/2014
They finally had some time together. A good time, laughing and talking and walking. Then the space they shared under the awning out of the rain. Too bad Richard showed up. I don't think she saw him as more than a friend though. He probably thought he could have more. I think Bella definitely felt the connection between her and Edward.
Nelleke chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Interesting. He is willing to give it a second chance to try and be with her. But what will she do? At some point he will have to explain what he is, unless she decides she doesn't want a long term relationship with him. I'm very curious where this will go. Tanya is funny, how she tries to seduce him. She finally gets it that she can't change his mind.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 9 . 10/20/2014
What a great story. So wonderful. So beautifully written. Just flawless.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 9 . 10/13/2014
Beautiful string of spontaneous moments. Loved each one. Thank you dearly. This chapter was nicely done.

TrillionSchiffer chapter 7 . 10/12/2014
Nice chapter. Thanks for not going into the lemons to deeply. Most fanfic writers forget they are writing fanfic, an not a script for a porno when it comes to lemons. You touched on the subject very...tastefully.

So good job there.

Now off to meet the rest of the family.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 6 . 10/12/2014
Nicely done. This was on e of the best come out moments in fanfic. Great Job.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 2 . 10/12/2014
I understand every one of his reasoning for missing all his cues to 'step up' b/c i've been there myself. But god he is still and idiot to me.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Reading this was an act in patience. It is so frustrating to read Edward POV. His mind justify the worse B.S. I've ever heard.

God if I don't hate him. [This version any way]
readicted chapter 9 . 9/17/2014
This wonderful, wonderful story was mentioned by two people over on Robattack, so I decided to bypass all the other stories I have on my TBR list, to give your story a read. The Decision did not disappoint! This was such a beautiful and compelling story. You took our beloved characters and improved them by allowing them to grow and mature. I also appreciate that you've kept them from becoming socially isolated and stifled by their love. I love that they do it their way, on their terms. I know that this story has been around for a while, I'm just so thankful that two lovely ladies brought it to my attention. Hope you still read your reviews because I want to thank you for sharing this lovely story. Thank you!
dpennell007 chapter 9 . 9/16/2014
There are SO many things I love about your story: Bella graciously accepting Edward's gifts, his own delightful confidence in himself once he takes the chance to express his feelings, and your wonderful idea of including Edward's pictures and childhood memories to help explain the man he's become today.

What a great idea to let them both mature for a short time alone, then come back together able to appreciate the joy of rediscovering one's perfect companion. A real pleasure to read. Thank you!
Just Sus chapter 7 . 9/14/2014
I've read this story before, but maybe not after it was completed! The first chapters were familiar, but these latter ones are not! I love their love story!

Rita01tx chapter 9 . 9/13/2014
Wonderful story, darlin'! So glad it wouldn't let you go until it was told LOL!
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