|Reviews for Cold|
| The Kamereon chapter 8 . 3/23
the character development!
i love this ! great job.
hope to see more of my favourite pairing
| Yami-Guy chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
I will admit...I almost quit trying to read this story when I saw canon naruto being depicted. There is a reason I don't watch/read naruto anymore. I will continue reading though, because I always enjoy fics that punch holes in his philosophy...I mean naruto has the mentality of a 6 year old.
| winddemon199 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
When Samui say your so big I would say yes yes I am LMFAO .
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 8 . 8/9/2014
The book 'The Greatest Show On Earth' sounds pretty awesome and interesting.
Good to see Naruto found his mums grave too.
Awesome Naruto killed Sasuke, Tsunade had a hand in killing Madara and Onoki landed the final blow.
Good to see Naruto won't stop.
That ending was quite powerful.
Yay Naruto and Samui together.
Awesome work you did with this story.
Will you do a sequel for this story? You got enough to work with.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
Maito Gai what a legend not even Orochimaru or Kabuto could figure the man out.
Nice of Kisame to greet and say goodbye to Samui like that.
Cool Rasengan variant.
Yay Kyuubi, go Kyuubi.
Haha go Gai. Truly he is a legend.
Great fight scenes.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 6 . 8/8/2014
Haha I like Yamato's plan. Get Samui to say it for him.
I don't believe Naruto has killed anyone can't remember exactly. Makes sense that he hasn't killed anyone though.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 5 . 8/8/2014
Sakura got what she deserved trying and doing that.
Damn Naruto killed a civilian woman.
Eh how could have A not found Bee yet? He was in Tetsu no Kuni or at least close to there.
Interesting and good chapter.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 4 . 8/8/2014
Eh you killed Karin. You completely changed what happened, interesting.
Eh you are referring to Tobi here as actually Madara, interesting.
I wonder who the captive was though hmm,
Eh Sakura has a tanto? Wow Sakura is dead.
Aww poor Kakashi. Though Kakashi died and all his wounds were healed. You didn't take that into account it seems.
You are changing a lot.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 3 . 8/8/2014
Haha Naruto calling Yamato mum.
Haha got to love Omoi he was such an awesome character.
Eh Naruto could forgive Sasuke by joining forces with 'The Akatsuki'. He did in Canon though whether it was straight away or not I forget haha.
Bahahahhahahahahahaha Tobi sitting and enjoying the show I would have done that too.
Bahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaha Sakura here is hilarious.
Funny about Naruto and Samui talking about Tobi.
Bahahahahahahahaha Omoi asking for explanations priceless.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 2 . 8/8/2014
Good use of flashbacks.
Good interesting chapter.
It is awesome how you explain your reasoning at the end of the chapters.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Haha funny how Naruto who is the Genin is the leader.
Reading Naruto was hilarious.
Very interesting chapter.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/13/2014
Not bad. Make a remake
| BlackRevenant chapter 8 . 2/13/2014
deserves these reviews.
interesting, a little funny, some drama, kinda romancy. Everything you said it was.
I was the idiot looking for more lol.
Thanks for sharing.
| BlackRevenant chapter 7 . 2/13/2014
I always felt the Rasengan was incomplete.
I mean I know they say that in canon, but I felt Naruto never really finished it either.
I think they kept it a purely close range jutsu cause they made Naruto into a close range bruiser.
Kenchi618 in alot of his stories come up with interesting "complete" variations of the Rasnegan principal.
| BlackRevenant chapter 6 . 2/12/2014
Dunno what or how to feel about Naruto's breakdown/confession.
Mostly cause thats not what I thought was running through his head.
Thus this weird sense of disappointment but enlightenment.