Reviews for On mind changing, and its consequences
jjellybeans chapter 3 . 7/14/2015

That was absolutely beautiful. Incredibly well written, I was able to picture every single delicate detail. It was romantic but not too corny. AMAZING!
Nelliplier48 chapter 3 . 11/9/2014
I love your flow and the description as you write. Your imagery was beautiful and your style.. Is simply beautiful as well. So well written, I love it. Luna all the way.
ninaxw chapter 3 . 7/29/2014
Romantic, sexy and it has LuNa in it... I'd say it's a perfect fic. :)
Guest chapter 3 . 6/21/2014
seireidoragon chapter 3 . 5/19/2014
This was a great story and I loved how you wrote Luffy in this one!
skelekc chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Your English is great. I couldn't tell it was ur second language until you said it. Great story too. I like it
Collin Oshea chapter 3 . 7/19/2013
Fantastic story, I enjoyed this story very much. Thanks for writing it
giby-chan chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
nami puede haber quedado embarazada :O
Guest chapter 3 . 4/2/2013
aww, this was sweet! I love how tender and affectionate both behave, good work!
Bitten Nails chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
Dammit, Luffy! Why you so cute? .
Bitten Nails chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
GOD, that was so...! Oh, my gawd! This was just...

Damn, woman. You leave me speechless.
omagerdnerdynord chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
aaaaw :3 ! so much fluuuff! i love this story. i myself, am french as well so i understand the whole "not your original language" thing, (even though i speak flluently with no accent and stuff), and i just want to precise that i think that when you said tights and tight, you meant thighs and thigh. just saying.
other than that , this is amazing, i love it !
NothingWithEverything chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
Lol the next morning is going to be awkward. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing it!
ScorpioQueen96 chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
aaww that was totally cute and just kewl. i really liked lit
Generic Reviewer No.5 chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
A nice short story, a few small grammar mistakes (Latter, is spelt later in the first chapter) but considering this is a second language very well done. I especially loved the metaphors such as Luffy's emotional state compared to an oyster- priceless!
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