Reviews for Jimmy With A Twist
forgotten22 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Lol That was a surprise. But I rather liked it! *in a sing-song voice* Bellas crushing on the cashier. Bella's crushing on the cashier! hehe Too cute. She was adorable with her little stutter and sweaty palms and getting wet panties at the thought of her. :)

Great job! I loved it! :) Good luck in the contest!
BeCullen chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
haha tricky. Good luck
IrisDraven chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Wasn't expecting that ending! It was good,but I think I woke up the roomie laughing with the Britney reference.
one of eddie's girls chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Oh wow a esme Bella slash. That's different.
Anisah Pinky chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
totally NOT expecting that LOL.
BoydBlog chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Wow, how awesome, I totally DID NOT expect it to be...Esme! I could almost feel Bella's nerves as she went to buy the alcohol - underage! Lol.

Great 400 words. Good luck in the contest!
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
didnt see that ending coming! nice twist
vbfb1 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Nice twist everyone would be expecting Edward.
proudmom21 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Whao! haha didn't expect that ending. :)