Reviews for Mara, Weyrling Brown Rider |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mara loked like she would never catcha a break but hopefully it will get better, really enjoying this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am rereading this after Mara's previous fics. First Scoring is really good and is in no way a spoiler for this Weyrling fic. I regularily loose myself on Pern for hours(candlemarks) on end. I do look forward to each chapter. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nyeh... I really love this story. The dragonriders of Pern was always, and still is, my favorite book series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another chapter well worth waiting for. I am surprised though, with all that oil, that the Agenothree couldn't be quickly washed off and neutralised with washing soda as it would take many hours to breach the oil and even start to damage leather; or is this a clue? is it indeed the much more powerful aqua regia, a combination of sulphuric and nitric acid that can even destroy bodies [after all we all know AMC made a mistake in thinking F'nor could destroy dead firelizard bodies with agenothree]? you can't make nitric acid without sulphuric acid which would be a smithcraft secret so I'm wondering if this is a big clue to someone with smithcraft training... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Having only recently discovered fan fiction, I was able to read all of your chapters thus far at once. Marvelous. Thank you for your efforts and your time, talented person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did try to review last night but as is often the case mobile review would not post. I do enjoy your 'Mara' fics and this is nicely and most interesting filling and expand her early learning. I am waiting, with barely supressed excitement, further chapters. Thankyou for writing and sharing. Wendy |
![]() ![]() Woohoo! Another wonderful chapter! Thank you. :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Don't worry! the Muse is a fickle bitch and needs to be slapped upside of the head at times but mostly she needs to be allowed her head... It's going fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, fighting the muses myself, something about finals this week. I'll take your advice, next week. lol Good chapter, can't wait to see the flying together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter. A more sensitive, and mature, G'regg is shown. Knew the traits had to be there in a wingleader somewhere. Klamath's excitement was good to see. I am looking forward to seeing Mara's first ride on Klamath. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well you have developed the skills far more in these chapters and I have,as always enjouyed reading them. Thank. I do not know which word you altered unless it was telepathic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nitpicky here, riders are all telepathic, it's the trait that makes them riders. It's the degree of telepathy vs telempathy. Lessa, a queen rider is going to be more telepathic than Mirrim, who is more empathic. Good so far, so glad you updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moving along nicely with some good consolidation of the training of the talented |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful update. So much information in this chapter. It was very enjoyable to read. Good to see Golanth taking off and flying on his own. Klamath just could not pass up a 'gift wherry'. |