Great story, huge commitment, very grateful you have shared your time and talents

- Okay, Greens once every seven days? (Where did that come from?), ... or as according to the creator of almost all Pern lore / canon, Greens rise in a mating flight only three to four times per turn, ... let's not make too many changes to Anne's Pern, ... after all. I like it as it is, ... ;-) TTFN

- I was diagnosed with type 2 Diabetes a few years ago, and I found no problems with your narrative, ... rest easy, ... ;-) TTFN

I know that this story was published over a decade ago, ... but I loved it, along with its companion pieces. If you ever feel the need to write about Mara in her Rocking-Chair years, I would really love to read it, ... thanks for sharing your imagination, and for daring to play in our beloved Dragon Lady Anne's universe, ... I think that you did good!

... middle of nowhere, Wyoming, huh, ... Another of my favorite Authors is from Shariden, Wyoming and she writes a wonderful series: Home for Horny Monsters, ... it's great! I discovered it on a free site, Literotica, and it is also available on SOL (stories online), ... And I am loving your Pern story, ... ;-) TTFN

Please, PLEASE continue adding TIA 3

Please, Please, Please, don't abandon this story! I've been waiting for a story like this since Skies of Pern. You are a great story teller and write so well that i get totally immersed in it and don't want the chapter to end.
Please come back soon

I really love this story, Mara, Klamath and all the other characters are very well written, I’m hoping to see another update soon.

I hope that you are still out there, well and enjoying life. Hope that someday you can continue this excellent story. Thank you for sharing these stories. Good luck.

Thank you for all the enjoyment I got from this work. Loved your story, but please don't leave us hanging! It's 3 years now. (3/2/21, this day)

I'm not positive but I think you don't want to characterize F'lar as "infamous" (and Lessa in the previous chapter). It's a derogatory and they aren't.

I'm loving all the exciting plot twists you're giving the story. Can't wait to read more. I was hoping Mara would find T'men a possible love interest, but I'm liking where you're taking it now.

I felt the weyrling practice was informative. I don't think anyone else has written about that so thanks.

Lots of detail, LOVED it.

Loving all the character development so far. Kudos