I'm glad you're back! :)

Great chapter. I like the reactions of the little dragons to everything that goes on in their world. Shaking the water off on L'terick was adorable. :)

Thanks for sharing. I'm looking forward to more.

Great to read that 'real life' hasn't stolen you away completely.

Some lovely touches with Cally training Klamath and L'ret learning to understand Mekelroy

Thank-you

trying to income taxes and read this story...guess which one is wining...

not even a struggle,its not even a fair contest...on to the next chapter!hehehe

have really enjoyed the original story and the an alone sets this to be just as enjoyable! smile lots!

}}}that's as close to a regular smile symbol on this program...

on to the next installment

Yay! New Mara saga! I really look forward to your chapters. You did a great job with the summary and I'm looking forward to reading this series. I went back and re-read the other two just to make sure I have all the info. I really liked the future story because you have a little insight into where she winds up and how everything flows together in time. I'll be very interested to see how you treat the last turn of thread and the weyrs' reactions to a potentially thread-free future!

Yay! New Mara saga! I really look forward to your chapters. You did a great job with the summary and I'm looking forward to reading this series. I went back and re-read the other two just to make sure I have all the info. I really liked the future story because you have a little insight into where she winds up and how everything flows together in time. I'll be very interested to see how you treat the last turn of thread and the weyrs' reactions to a potentially thread-free future!

This is a good story so far. I've always wondered what happened to Mara while she was tending Klamath as a young dragon. You touched on that a little bit in your original story but I'm sure you'll go more in depth in this one.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading