|Reviews for Broken|
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 21 . 1/20
Whoa, great way to have Stoick accept it...get through the rage and it was like he was grieving for the old berk, much like his wife...great metaphor
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 20 . 1/20
Such a great job capturing Astrid's character. Excellent point about Stoick's trust, that often gets overlooked.
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 19 . 1/20
Loved how you had Snotlout view dragons as a weapon to be respected...fits him so well. His thoughts on Hiccup were great. Good idea to put it in Astrid's POV, you can empathize with her more. Poor Hiccup, at least he fought for it though
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 18 . 1/20
Wow, nice job developing the conflict and emotions. I'm impressed Stoick talked to Hiccup. Though the leadership thing may have gone better if he had started slower or explained why he thought Hiccup could handle it
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 17 . 1/20
Oh, I thought Kettlecrack was done...still makes for a good story. Snotlout was a surprisingly good teacher too
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 16 . 1/20
So cool to see how Toothless views Hiccup, wonderful how he finally gets through to him and boosts his self esteem.
I always did wonder what Toothless thought of Stoick, I agree with his confusion
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 15 . 1/20
Dun dun dun...Stoick will probably regret that. Good to see him being a chief when he's not dealing with dragons. He should've asked Hiccup for help though tsk tsk
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 14 . 1/19
Like the progress you see with Toothless and Hiccup. Ruffnut was hilarious
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 13 . 1/19
Great job with all the names. I like the First Hunter story quite a bit...his name for Hiccup fits with how many times he has to snap Hiccup out of a funk or self-loathing.
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 12 . 1/19
I like Jaspin, what a great character.
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 11 . 1/19
Very cool...good point about easing them into the communication thing
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 10 . 1/19
Good suspense, but boy do I feel bad for that dragon
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 1/19
I think he should've told Fishlegs...except Fishlegs wouldn't have kept it quiet.
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 1/19
Very cool perspective switch...like the Preytooth and the hand comparison
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 1/19
Whoa, just whoa. The amazing depths and heights this chapter reached were unbelievable, you should be very proud.