|Reviews for Paradox|
| AdriaxAsclepius chapter 5 . 7/11/2012
Yes Jay it is weird that you are proud of them.
| AdriaxAsclepius chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
So far so good it has really short and easy to read paragraphs especially when I am short on time and the other fanfics I have read had to slow of a pace.
| historiangirl chapter 15 . 8/7/2011
It was a good story. I love so much what Alex said in the end.
| PastelLace chapter 15 . 8/4/2011
this was a great story :3
| HoneyGoddess57 chapter 15 . 7/21/2011
... it was a very goos story, you should be proud; oh Alex he's so funny for saying this at the end; yay Herry has stopped Neil from saying "Get a Room!"
| Kiwi ingenuity chapter 15 . 7/21/2011
YES! You finally updated! And the ending was pure awesomeness, I loved the last line, it was hilarious! XD Alex is so adorable!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/9/2011
Why have you not created the next chapter in Paradox yet? :
| HorseRuler24 chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
I love this story:D please hurry to update!
| HoneyGoddess57 chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
Oh I forgive you just take your time, it's not a rush.
| Kiwi ingenuity chapter 13 . 6/11/2011
It hasn't been that long, there's been stories in this section not updated for months or even YEARS on end. But update soon all the same!
| Kiwi ingenuity chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
YAY! You finally updated! And I knew Archie was still alive, just knew it. Awesome story is awesome, keep updating! :D
| historiangirl chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
Good story. I knew the two Atlanta will go to get free Archie and Alex. I love Cronus' reaction when he saw the two Atlanta.
| HoneyGoddess57 chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
Oh this is so going to be good, hmm... I wonder is this the "Future" Jay or what; in every chapter it's starting to be more interesting.
| Feather Gambler chapter 9 . 4/1/2011
Please please update soon I'm really loving this story ]
| Kiwi ingenuity chapter 9 . 3/31/2011
OMG! This is so awesome! Update now I say! Now! I wanna see what happens, and who this myserious prisoner is!