Reviews for A Bedtime Story
Tortall Gixie chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Interesting...
CrazyDyslexicNerd chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
I really don't feel like logging in right now. Interesting. Are you sure that everyones a bad singer or if it's just Allanna? Update your great story soon!

-Dyslexic Nerd
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
This'll be entertianing. *sits back with bowl of popcorn even though the Nerd dislikes popcorn*

-Dyslexic Nerd
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I am actually kind of confused by this, because you didn't seem to add anything to the story. I expected you to do something original with what she was telling Aly, to have more interaction between Aly and Alanna. Instead you had only two or three original lines and the rest was paraphrasing the book. You have it classified as 'parody' (which it isn't, btw), but that doesn't mean the story shouldn't still have a purpose and be enjoyable to your readers.

KrisEleven
Emmason Eppes chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Very interesting. but the change between mommy and mama got me a little bit confused most children call there mom one or the other. but other then that really really good.