Reviews for Azalya Monty Relm Runner |
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angg chapter 1 . 11/11/2016 this is bad and you should feel bad |
self insert chapter 1 . 11/11/2016 wooo great circle jerk ya got there. dont add yourself into the story its just kinda sad |
NaTak chapter 6 . 12/18/2013 "Here is a list of conducts that should always be observed: Spell check all story and poetry. There is no excuse for not performing this duty. If you do not have a word processor that has the spell checking feature, use a search engine such as to find one. Proofread all entries for grammar and other aspects of writing before submission. 'Hot off the press' content is often riddled with errors. No one is perfect but it is the duty of the writer to perform to the best of his/her ability." XOXO |
Nance chapter 1 . 12/17/2013 LOOK! A troll!fic. Seriously, if ya gonna fake bad spelling, take a couple pages off Harry Potter's indafmaous fic «My Immortal». *Snort* Idjit. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2013 Spelling errors! |
Sin - NaMe chapter 3 . 1/3/2013 It's Arthur... and LOL XD aww Merlin was worried X3 |
Sin - NaMe chapter 2 . 1/3/2013 It's Aang and Super Boy... I do not know too much english but supper means food.. It's The food boy *-* |
Sin - NaMe chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 ...Who's Taugh? |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2012 Arthur is spel R; Aang is spel G |
Azalya Monty chapter 1 . 2/4/2012 hi ya this is something i do in my free time, i am odd and i thought this was awesome. well sorry if you don't like me or my humor well sorry that you don't get me. my story goes from avatar to young justice because why go from avatar with their powers to Merlin where you have to be in fear? well i used yj as an awesome in between. i think that Merlin is awesome and i was half in love with Angg when i was a kid, i'm one of the people that can find animated people attractive. |
Kellsabelle chapter 6 . 2/1/2012 Hey, You should ignore the trolls who did nothing but flame your efforts. There is plenty of room for improvment but you're trying in a day and age when there are plenty of people who would rather just give up. Writing anything over 10,000 words is an achievement and you should be proud of your efforts. That said an exellent skill to have is to be able to edit without relying on spell check, take some time and use a dictionary, you should keep working on all your ideas. :) |
PretendingToWrite chapter 4 . 10/16/2011 What the frick? They were in Young Justice then Merlin? I was an idiot to think I might understand later. I was. Azayla was a mary sue who can't spell from the start. And she goes from being in lurve with a 12 year old to being in love with a like twenty year old? Slut. And she beat Arthur in a sword fight with Sokka's sword? Have you even watched the shows you attempted to ruin? May the force be with you. -jedichild |
PretendingToWrite chapter 1 . 10/16/2011 Can't even read far enough to scroll down. Who are these people? Angg and Tough? ? I don't compute! |
abc123 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 I'm pretty sure you need this thing called spellcheck. Just. Um. Yeah. Like, for starters. It's Aang not Angg. And so many more. |
Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 3/5/2011 Not sure if serious. |