Reviews for Darkness, hold him
holysnitch chapter 1 . 7/23
Brilliant, perfect, gorgeous etc etc etc. You can Write alright. I loved the switching perspectives of different characters and how you know how to translate their vulnerability and uncertainty, if that makes sense? Another story of yours added to my favourites. I have a feeling it won’t be the last. chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
this was awesome :)
Lilablassblau chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This was... breathtaking. I'm a huge fan of Draco and his vulnerable side. And you made him... awesome! This was a kind of story I've been searching for. I skipped the parts of Harry and Ginny to be honestly (because I really don't like them as pairing, Ginny is... I don't know how to describe it, but for me, she's not a character to be liked easily), but I've read the rest, especially the last part, a thousand times!

I liked how you described Bill and Draco and even Ron, who most of the times is some dumb idiot in the stories, was really well written. It was even a bit sad, reading his parts. And surprisingly I like the bits of George and Hermoine. I've never imagened them as a pair, but they are sweet!

Thank you for your Draco, too little authors can describe him and his (difficult) feelings this well. I loved the most the part where he realized how cozy the Burrow is and that his home never was. It was... heartbreaking. Add Molly's thought of Draco never being allowed to be a child- I nearly burst into tears. Poor, poor Draco.

Thank you so much for sharing! Love Lilablassblau
dezert chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
i loved thiss! you are an excellent writer keep at it!

oh and please write some more malfoy and bill smut ;) its too damn sexy! xxx
xRavingLunaticx chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I really liked this pairing (Draco/Bill). Loved all the different points of views, it really added to the story. As always wonderful writing.
ShoonatheGOAT chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I like the whole different POV thing you did. it made the story unique.
Lady Ginger chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
it was good, although a bit short. I'd like to read more of Bill & Draco, and also know what happens next. Between Hermione & George... and others too. please write a sequel!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
great job! there was a lot of unresolved stuff in this story, but i liked that, i think, because it's kind of indicative of where they are in the war.
Eora chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Eee, a new story! Okay, I must be honest and hold up my hands and say that Draco was never a favourite character of mine; I guess it’s the same with you and Boromir :P I was never much enamoured with the actor and of course, you’re not meant to really like the character throughout the books so I was never a huge fan. But, (but but BUT) this is your writing we’re talking about here. And somehow you always manage to win me over with your wonderful words; I love how this story is set up almost like a series of drabbles or vignettes, each mini-chapter focussing on a different character’s point of view, furthering the plot and also keeping each character distinct with their own views and feelings about what’s going on. I liked the whole premise as well, of Draco having to stay with the Weasley’s and the disruption (quiet or otherwise) that causes! (And the sub-plot of a possible Hermione/George…thing. I liked that too!) And as always your descriptions of the more mature scenes are always so tastefully done, I smiled at this line; “[…] his breath hitched when he saw just how much Bill liked lying in bed, talking to him.” And the scene right afterwards has such a wonderful contrast between the unexpected pain and upset and the affection that Bill shows Draco. I thought it was very sweetly handled indeed. It's always really nice to see such interesting themes handled with minimal words, I liked that very much indeed :) And you leave me feeling sorry for Draco, and comforted somewhat that he at least finds shelter for a little while and I find myself defeated as far as my previous ambivalence towards him went. Thank you for making me think! :)
phoenixandtiger chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I think you have converted me...That was just so sweet!
Bellsing chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I really liked the different PoV's and the Bill Draco pairing was interesting. I'm impressed that it was so emotional and didn't feel rushed even though it was short. Do you plan to add to it?
Paimpont chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Lovely story! There are so many interesting things going on in it, though, that I wish it had been a lot longer. What, if anything, will happen between Hermione and George, and how will that affect Ron? Or Fred? I love the Draco and Bill pairing, but I feel like I wanted to hear more about what happens between them. Beautiful portrayal of Draco's feelings for Bill, though!

I also loved your depiction of the kind Mrs. Weasley; I can absolutely imagine her feeling protective towards Draco.

I enjoyed the story so much that you are forgiven for not updating Come Starlight for a few weeks :-)

Thanks for another great story! (But yes, it should probably be rated M...)