|Reviews for Could Have Been Worse|
| found dove in a soapless place chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I'm laughing too hard to think of a well versed and coherent review.
| li'l fat necrosis chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Nah had to be Paul!
| FairoNeko chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
| Poke chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
I wanna go punch ash in the face now or make someone rape himd
| writlings chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
omg this was so good! XD it had to be Paul! XD
| KameKame-chan chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
x3 I was laughing the entire time! Oh gosh, I think I just died! xD
| rin916 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Loved the ending to that... absolutely loved it!
| Hecate-Aidonaia chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
*Dies of laughter* That was great but something was bugging me: "Amber's my daughter you idiot!" Paul yelled, "If I beat her then Dawn would yell at me. If I lost, Dawn would make fun of me! It was a loose-loose situation!" Isn't it supposed to be 'It was a lose-lose situation!' Ash is evil O.O He was keeping score LOL Still this was a cute oneshot XD
| xxraimewxx chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
hmm did ash did it on purpose? cause he was counting XD
| Light-Sakura chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Okay great one-shot and I love how Dawn comes in the wrong moment! I couldn't stop laughing near the end!
| RaveOn-Goodbye chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
so the series ends
its started as a oneshot it ends as a oneshot lol
| INSPIRIT99 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This is pretty funny. I crack up when Dawn catches Paul in the wrong times and Ash's stupidness too.
| Lynn Sorcha chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Haha, this was really funny. I love it!
Go Ikarishipping! :D
Keep writing, you're really good at it.
| splitheart1120 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
LOL, Only Ash would take advantage of a situation like that. (_)
| kk chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
i love it!(: