Ah, Danny passing out in the first chapter. Pixie, you must have written that one!

Anyway, an interesting premise, and I'm excited for the next chapter! So glad you're still here, Pixie!

Hip to be Square,

Dragon

Oh, I can tell this is going to be great. After reading all of your other work, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us! This mysterious ghost is creepy already, what with the weird way he's able to control Danny and Vlad...I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Hm... that's one creepy ghost! I would hate to be Danny or Vlad in that situation!

I have a million questions about that crazy powerful ghost! But I assume that will be explained eventually! XD

First chapter was interesting and exciting! I'm excited to read more!

Keep up the awesome work!

Hmm... Interesting. This new ghost came up a lot quicker than i thought, but it's good. Heh. I was a bit confused at first because I am so use to reading you, Pixie, write first-person narration, so seeing third-person from you is a bit weird for me. Not bad. I just gotta get use to it.

You two have definitely caught my attention! A bit of spelling mistakes, but it was very good! I like Danny and Vlad's verbal fight. Definitely sounds like what we would hear on the show.

I also love this 'collector' Man, he sounds creepy and powerful. I mean to make the hybrids obey him without lifting a finger. And they even wanted to obey him! Freaky!

Yikes. Now, I wonder if he put them to sleep to kidnap them or to just come back another day for them..

I cannot wait for more. Oh, and my suggestions about reviews is for you guys to alternate between chapters. I am currently writing a story with a friend as well. And since we are posting it on my account, when it's her turn to answer, she just sends private messages to each reviewer. it's the same thing!

Well, I will await for more. I notice this is a 'humor' genre... Doesn't seem like it. Though, I don't mind I personally like the suspenseful stuff all the more!

Ta for now, kiddos! Keep up the awesome work!

you're kinda ruthless aren't you :D i likie it! GREAT IDEAAAAAA !

For someone that regularly redefines the way we look at fan fiction to the point of building entire new worlds for Danny, Vlad and co plus your own characters, its stunning just exactly what you can do to weave a plot as deep as it is easy to read. You seem to do the impossible by breaking all the rules of being in character, inventing worlds that are believable and rich in depth, all and all simply stunning...

Do you understand why I am thrilled to read this? Shall I go on about how profoundly different and unique this is?

Alright, I did my suck up for this story, now feed us more chapters and make DBack happy, hokay? Kapoosh?

Sincerely

DBack47

PS; Are we going to be seeing the whole gang of our favorite ghost zone villains?

This is fascinating.

Vlad's the mayor, and abusing his power to make Danny miserable. Danny came to fight him over it, and they get captured by an obviously superior power.

This is a different tone than your other Danny/Vlad stories have been.

I'm curious to see what you will do with this, and more importantly, what you will do to THEM. (I have every confidence that they'll eventually escape, but the operative term is "eventually.")

CynthiaW and I coauthored most of the "Ghost in Middle-earth" stories (the last one with Danielle was my own invention). With the second story, "What Becomes of an Enemy?", she was the main author. I sent her a printout of the Reviews, we discussed the answers, and we printed the answers of particularly intriguing questions out in the chapter.

It is a suggestion for how to make this work. Otherwise... One of the newer features in this site is to give the "Answer the Review" option to anyone, and you would make it a point to answer the ideas you think are directed your way, and Mutantlover could do the same.

Either way... Good job, both of you, and I look forward to seeing what you guys have next.

Sincerely,

Miriam