|Reviews for A Big Splash|
| ld chapter 2 . 1/23
i really enjoyed reading this, you're a great writer.
| abitherabii chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
This story was amazing! I think they should make Danny bad ass with fighting and extremely observant in the show as well! I love your writing style!
Thanks for posting xxx
| john'sgirlfriend2date chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Way cool! Thank you!
| Belker chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
Loved the whole story, but my favourite bit was the call from Dr Tanaka ;)
| Amy Rackley chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
Sorry for the super late review but I jut discovered this site for my new favorite show. Really awesome story. Great action and humor.
| Brumeier chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
This was action packed! Loved Danny's big rescue of Steve and how they uncovered the terrorist plot. I bow to your superior action sequences. LOL!
| FicreaderT chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
What a great story! Well-written with an interesting plot and, I feel, very true to the characters. I like your original character, Aku, and enjoyed reading how his skepticism at Five-0 leading the raid was turned into respect for Steve and his team. I got a little sidetracked for a couple minutes trying to figure out what the 10th SWAT member was doing, because I couldn't find any mention of him after the others led the prisoners out, but that's a minor thing and did not affect my enjoyment of the story at all. I am looking forward to reading the rest of your stories!
| cytpotter chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
hahahahahaha poor Steve! He is always in trouble with the doctors! ;) LOVED this story! Very amusing! Great Job! Thanks for the wonderful read!
| rivendellelve chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
Great story I think I like Aku
| wotumba1 chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
nice little action there
would be great to see that on tv
| LisaG16 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
"No, put the shirt back on," Danny advised. "The tattoos spoil that whole innocent cabana boy vibe you're going for."
I love Danny-in-charge...he's even more wonderful (hot) that way! :P
| McKay'Snark chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Loved seeing Danny rescue Steve from the water. I love 'Danny can really swim' fics. Also, again, I love your original character, Dr. Tanaka. Great interaction between the team! Thanks for sharing!
| BandBfan chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
This was an amazing piece of writing.
The quality of your work is so professional, and among some of the best I have read daily on in the last year & a half.
I have read thru half of your work, now and am looking forward to the rest.
I have been looking for good quality H50 stories since I started watching the show, so glad I found yours!
Thanks for sharing,
| Serenity Starke chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
I just absolutely love the way you write Danny. So many stories make him out to be just a big ranting windbag and you write the intelligence, the quick witted, the resourceful guy that he really is and that he would have to be in order to be the detective he's supposed to be. I love how you have his ineractions with each of the team members and the little nuances you give him are terrific. I especially liked your "scene" where Kono is in awe of how Danny just takes charge and no one questions it. Great story!
| Purplehonor chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
This story is great. I liked the ending with Grace calling and Steve getting in trouble! Great job! Keep writing.