Reviews for Spiral
Poxxy chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Aw I can't see why you wouldn't have won! This was written really well and so so hot.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I would've voted for it...
dragongoddess13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
awesome story!
Skyrere chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
this couple are delicious together. XD

I love them.

Great Job.
Drea1284 chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
CarefreeSummer chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I thought it was pretty good. Totally deserved somevotes!
Clearheart chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
This was rather fabulous. I enjoyed how we get some time gaps as Sakura grows up, and the explanation of how Kakashi doesn't view her in that way... at first. Then through that little incident in the forest he becomes very much aware of his female student's anatomy, and then with the way Sakura says his name in the alleyway... it looks like it all became too much for Kakashi to ignore.

Excellent work, Maesdream! It was fun reading how the fantasies for both of them immediately turned into reality, and the promising consequences that followed.
cutecrazyice chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
This was among my favorites. I really love what you did with your kink. I think it's very well-written. :D
eosdawnaurora chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
That was pretty hot! Nice work. 3
RosRua chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I like the way this story builds with the kink, how each relation of the fantasy gets greater and greater, culminating in Kakashi hearing her call out 'Sensei!' in the alleyway. Kakashi making love to her with his mask on - now that was hot!

Thanks for a fantastic read!
Kagomaru chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
HOT! Really I wouldn't mind a little more story, or a sequel- but it was fun and sexy nonetheless. Good luck with the contest! _v
ISpeakFrench chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Nice! So well witten and really fun to read! :)
Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Naughtiness . . . heh heh heh. XD
Juniper11 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
"With a move that was nothing short of pornographic," THAT had me cracking up. It was hilarious and hot. Very, very hot.
ronny-of-yore chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
There's just something so tantalizing about Kakashi coming across Sakura getting busy in a dark alley with another guy. Especially when she calls out, "Sensei" for him to hear. I highly enjoyed the fact that he started fantasizing about her because of this. Thanks for the great read! Awesome job. :D
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