Reviews for A Child Without A Name
RazieLynn chapter 48 . 7/10
I love the amazing amount of thought and planning that must go into making this story. I cannot wait for the next update!
LdeWolfe chapter 48 . 3/2
Please please please with a cherry on top! Waiting patiently for the next installment of this excellent story!
Guest chapter 42 . 3/1
This is such a wonderfully told story, the darkness before the light. I am enjoying your characters so much!
LdeWolfe chapter 27 . 3/1
Love this story! You are amazing!
Hotmamantx chapter 48 . 2/19
New follower
scarletblackdies chapter 1 . 1/29
Poor Hermione, good story btw
Sassyluv chapter 48 . 12/12/2016
It's been a while... But I can't wait for more
Update soon!
Sassyluv xxx
Lily MJ Fae chapter 48 . 11/29/2016
Yay for updates! I'm glad you are doing well. Congrats on the new baby girl!

I loved this chapter, except the salem-obsessed history buff in me wants to mention that there were no drownings or burnings in Salem. Everyone was hung. Except one man. And he was pressed to death.
But still a lovely chapter. Afraid to see what verify acomplishes. And I hope to see more Hermione and severus :)

I hope things stay well.
Baskina chapter 48 . 11/21/2016
So happy you are still writing on this! I love the story.
she is brighter chapter 48 . 11/16/2016
I wonder how this is going to go... hmmmm.
kittysundae chapter 48 . 11/14/2016
I just started this story roughly 24 hours ago and I cannot wait to read more!
mandiecandie chapter 48 . 11/12/2016
Great story so 4 nights to read.
Your chapters are so in depth. And there are a few side stories to keep things interesting.
JM2010 chapter 14 . 11/10/2016
Okay, so first off, I love the plot line so far. You have the makings for a great story here...
But as a fellow writer (I'm working on my own original fiction right now) can I just say that it seems like they use each other's names too much in conversation? People don't talk to each other that way. And the dialogue seems a little melodramatic. I know you want the scenes to be powerful because of the circumstances, but it's much more effective and powerful to the reader to create individual gestures to show their emotions than using the dialogue to spew every emotion they have. It also makes Severus' character contradicting... I think you're trying to make him formal to others and more open to Hermione as an exception, but even in that context he's way too wordy about it.
On the other hand, you've done a great job showing how Hermione's trauma and PTSD have affected her quality of life even without Ron complicating it further. Those issues and reactions are spot on, and since she's never gotten professional help, they would be worsening over time - just like Ron's behaviour toward her worsened. So that part is GREAT. Again, great job with the plot and storyline. I'll keep reading, and I can't wait to see how you mature as a writer!
General Mac chapter 48 . 11/9/2016
please tell me there is an explanation for the dark curses, and that she doesn't suffer any more, thanks love it more when you can pretty please
Moewe24aol.com chapter 48 . 11/9/2016
I was so happy to find a new chapter, but even more so to read about the birth of your baby girl! My sincere, heartfelt congratulations, and may you and your family be blessed!
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When I found this new chapter, I just had to take a quick look into the previous one, and I don't really remember if I read it at all, before today I mean. It was good to read it again, so I got the perfect summary of everything happening up to that moment. Now, this new chapter is certainly rather dark, what with Verity worming her way into the magical community over there through Blair and her family, but these two are rather mean either. Maybe they don't even realise, but who in their right state of mind can approve of their government, authorities or whatever they are named to do that horrible thing to all the innocent muggle families who happen to have a magical child?! Don't they think for themselves, Blair and her husband I mean, but let everything just happen uncritically? But no matter in what state of mind they are, I am afraid that lots of harm will come to them through Verity, and to suffer from the hands of that vile creature and the likes of her is more than anyone deserves. Such a depraved, disgusting character ... maybe Bellatrix, Greyback and the likes of them compare, but hardly anybody else. Quite nauseating, that scene when she went to bed, thinking of her father and ... *retches*
The whole chapter was well writen, of course, as always, and - again - I was very happy to find it in the inbox.
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