Reviews for A Broken Doll
Vicious Pink chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Nice addition to your PS3 story collection. Your interpretation of Mieu not feeling as though Rhys is her master is interesting; it's not something I would have considered, but her personality is cute and impish here (well, except for the end) and her banter with Rhys is entertaining. I don't know how I feel about Miun having watchers, I mean, one of the things about Miun's story that makes it so poignant is that she's completely alone. However, that's just how *I* feel about Miun and I know not everyone would agree with that. In any case, great job, as always, and I'm looking forward to your next story. :)

I noticed one little grammar mistake: "The young Orakian prince ran his hair through his hair..." You probably meant "his hand through his hair." ;)