|Reviews for The Dark One|
| Mary chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Hello I know it's been 2 years since you wrote on this story don't know how you get your reviews. But I was reading your story an got into it. It's a very good story, I ready a lot and I love reading stories that people make from their favorite manga an anime. I'm wondering if your still writing an if you please would finish this story. I think it's a great story an would love to read more
| Yorushike chapter 12 . 4/5/2014
this is a beautifully written story and I hope that you will continue it some day. I love the Chrno you have portrayed, though he is a bit out of character.
I am looking foreward to finding out what happened with Maria Magdalena and what will bring Rosette to trust Chrno and his friends.
| Jemstone6259 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Best story ever!
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
How cute of Chrono, if only I went to her sooner he wouldn't have to deal with all that crap from the order and the distrust of Rosette and Joshua.
I wonder why Satella and Florette didn't adopted Joshua and Rosette. It could save them a lot of time an trouble. Since they're rich they have all the things I take care of kids and Rosette and Joshua could get used to demons (Chrono and Shader) without the suspicion. No 'nightmares' for Rosette and the order will find out quite late that Chrono was freed from his cell. XD
Again I ask pretty please update this awesome story!
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/20/2013
Come on Joshua just when they were getting closer, you just had to ruin the fun for everyone, especially the shippers!
Well Rosette you only need to grow closer to Chrono if you wanna hear the whole story. I think most readers are anticipating that moment. Hopefully Rosette won't be so racist and hostile towards Chrono. Now that she knows him a bit better. Thought I wonder how she'll react if she found out that he knows everything about her. Wait, does that mean that he also knows when she had her first period? How disturbing, Chrono you perv!
I love those chapters where Chrono and Rosette have some alone time together.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
Awesome I still enjoy Chrono in and apron and the scene where he walked into Rosette while she was still in her towel. XD also when Shader started to tease him. I guess we all love to tease him.
Remington's angry mood was also satisfying, he's so blinded by hate that he doesn't think straight or about the real meaning of Mary's dying words. Hopefully by the time he finds Chrono, Rosette would have opened her heart for him.
Joshua and Az need to calm down a bit too. They can see that Chrono and the others aren't evil and that everything the order told them is completely subjective. Non of them had actually studied the demon race so they shouldn't judge a book for its cover. Humans can be cruel too, Hitler and Stalin killed many innocent people in the most horrid/ torturous ways. Demons at least give them victims a quick dead... I think.
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2013
Dyaaaaah. Well at least Chrono doesn't need to worry about Rosette's well being anymore and Rosette won't have to think about a new place to stay and hide, besides she'll be with Az and Joshua so it shouldn't be that bad. Thought I do advice Rosette to brush her teeth. It always takes me much a long time I get that disgusting taste and smell away after throwing up.
I'd think that the kid demon hit his head in the beginning or something. Or I wouldn't be able to hear anything because my iPod is too loud heh.
Well at least they were able to have some fun and the Magdale Order can't get to Rosette for now. Yippie!
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2013
Chrono Chrono Chrono, he really has a lot to learn. After all those years people have changed especially women. We've become emotional nightmares who have mood swings each month and are very demanding and bossy. At least most of us. Rosette is the living prove, since he hit him where he breaths and she was still thinking about way to get away. She also refuses to be submissive.
Only after they're done in the library they noticed Rosette was gone, geez, but at least it gave the readers a nice RosettexChrono moment.
Remington needs to leave them alone. Rosette is not magdalene, she is very upbeat full of live and has her own ways of using her time. She can also take perfectly care for Joshua and herself, besides she's an adult. So she doesn't need to listen to others if se doesn't want to.
I'm still hoping you're continuing his story.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
Stupid iPod I wasn't even done.
Anyway even if Rosette wouldn't dare to think about that possibility romance is coming her way, in the form of a demon she doesn't know how I handle woman. He should try reading some of those novels or play an otome game. That would help.
I'm quite impressed how Josh and Az can stay so long in a library. I wouldn't be able to do that without breaking or becoming crazy.
Time for the next round.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
The last part of this chapter stays one of my favs. Also nice that Rosette wants to play matchmaker for Az and her bro.
The feeling of lying in a bed after hours and hours in a car. I can relate to that, xept that it was a bus in my case and I could hardly sleep.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
Maybe those higher ups in the order need to take classes in human psychology, I'm sure if the FBI or the UN knew about their way of thinking they would be arrested. First of all since in these times no one believes in supernatural creatures. Second of al the influence of the church has decreased a lot in the past centuries and they've gone again human rights. Keeping a young adult locked up against her will isn't really well humane. Not that the FBI is 100% clean and innocent.
So the price of freedom. It's a big one and complete freedom doesn't exist, since they have to run away when the order catches up to them. Makes you question what freedom is.
Anyway time to go to the chapter where Rosette and Chrono are finally reunited again.
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2013
And that's why people should study the enlightenment more, instead of letting themselves get carried away by emotions like Chrono and Remington did they should have thought about the consequences of their actions and Rosette and Joshua shouldn't believe everything the order tells them. Sister Kate admitted herself that they didn't know much about demons.
About 30 years ago the church and all those other stupid people called gays evil, how is that humane and fair? Just because something is unknown to them doesn't mean that it's evil.
So Rosette and Joshua, take Azmaria and get out of there.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
I still think Remington's action was reckless Joshua too, for all he knew the Magdale Order could be some criminal organization. If that was really true he'd be done for.
As for the watch thing; they should let their lives dominated by fear. It really takes away the fun.
As I said sooner, Chrono could pass sooner as a human and hook up with Rosette. That was he'd won her trust sooner and would choose his side, but instead it became a mess an interesting mess that is. I do feel sorry for Az, poor girl filled with guild.
I really hope you didn't drop this story.
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
Life sucks then we die. We should get used to it, but we don't. Yes Rosette get a shrink and tell him/ her that the lack of love/ romance/ physical contact with a loved one made you mind to give you almost sex dreams with a stranger you never met before.
And Josh be nicer to the person who's maintaining your life and gives you the luxury to study. Though your attitude is what makes us love you.
Remington should stop being a racist and go after even more dangerous criminals; like the Farc or Alkaida (However you spell it)
As for Chrono here's some useful advice about girls from a girl. Don't do anything that may scare the crap out of them, like the watch thing. You could pass sooner for a human and start dating her behind Remington's back, that would have been a better troll against them.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
So I'm reading this story for the 3rd/ 4th time and reviewing for the 2nd time. (Thought this time without signing in.) I still love it. It's so mysterious and it has a lil bit of humor.
If Joshua is so scared about the blondes go first thing then he should dye his hair. Good thing I don't need to worry about that since I'm a brunette.
I wonder how things would go if the siblings stayed until Chrono awoke.
I'll enjoy rereading the next chapters