|Reviews for Notice me|
| Melanieciel chapter 19 . 1/30
The story its just ... BEAUTIFUl ...BEAUTIFUL . Hinata's development is amazing how she learn from people bit by bit
And then all what she learns YOU put it in an amazing scene but i wish you but some sasuke development or sasuke's point of view
I really want to know what is he thinking
| Jolly9 chapter 14 . 1/2
I really hope you're health is much better!
I see a positive change in your writing style. It's good.
This chapter gave me more respect for hinata because at first I saw her as weak and irritating, the way she let people just walk all over her. And the way you changed Kiba's character like that- WOW! I really truly and honestly DID NOT see that coming! Nor that that was what was really going on. Man that is jacked up. Naruto is so ...
But yeah. Great story and be blessed!
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/2
I read this as I lay in my make-shift bed in the basement.. P:
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/1
Dude when she signed with her initials I just KNEW that he would catch on. I mean come ON! How can he be that dense? That "Haha" thing was very unexpected. That's was a good twist I must say!
| LHproductionz chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
upload soon please can't wait to find out what happens next, great story so fat XD
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/12/2013
this story is great. can't wait for the next chapter and see what hinata decided to do. :)
| Merpppx33 chapter 19 . 7/14/2013
Yeah ! Akatsuki in the house ! Woot woot ! Hey ! Why ?! Tenten ?! Why would you hate hina ! :0
| I.Eat.Bishie's chapter 19 . 7/13/2013
I read a story that you have been writing for, what, two years, in a day. I fell a bit bad. I got to not only see this story unravel and become something extremely unexpected but I also got to see how your life was for the time you have been writing this story. I mean you we're in a coma twice, you went through all that and you still keep writing this story. I've gotta say that is quite something.
When I started reading this story, to be honest, I didn't expect much other that the typical newbie story where everyone is in love with Hinata and all that. But even so I kept reading. And I realized, WOW this is actually genius! You developed the characters greatly, you can see them grow into themselves. Hinata especially. They have flaws but also virtues. The story might be all over the place, but that tends to happen when you have been writing a story for as long as you have, but what really makes this story so great is the way you handle the characters.
Kudos to you and I really, really hope you get better, because, hey, this might be the internet but that doesn't mean I can't worry, because seriously I would be really sad if something happened to you. Keep on writing and I look forward to whatever come's next.
| StealthFire718 chapter 19 . 7/13/2013
:O Oh no! Why does Tenten hate Hinata?! That really freaked me out a bit. I hope they make up. I realized that you're really good at keeping all of the characters stable. Maybe they are bipolar or weird, but the way you write them doesn't make it unreadable at all. In fact, I only find it more fascinating. And the plot so far really pulls me in, so I hope it continues that way.
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/13/2013
sasuhina! LOVE Sasori btw ;)
| PsychoticSky chapter 19 . 7/13/2013
So Hinata finally learned her too kind nature isn't always so rewarding and is finally taking good advice. Man Naruto's so oblivious it's actually just idiotic. Poor Hinata, I don't blame her at all for breaking any friendship with Sakura, though I'm actually surprised she did that, ah she's finally growing. And what the heck is TenTen's problem all of a sudden? -.-
| hatami chapter 18 . 7/8/2013
Nice work shika ...
| otakumaku18 chapter 18 . 7/7/2013
I'm so happy you updated! This is my absolute favorite story! When I looked at my email and saw that you updated I started running around and screaming like a crazy freak! (My mother is concerned..) I'm glad to hear that you're getting better! Try not to strain yourself, kay? You're health is waaay more important! I read your profile and I know how you feel, I have a retina issue that doesn't allow me to look at bright things very long, I usually have to wear sunglasses so people think I'm a douche, but it's reeeaallly fun messing with them! Anyway, reading the pickup lines your friends used on people had me laughing for like an hour straight! Seriously! Also, I never knew you were a dude! All this time I thought you were a girl! Props, man for writing such an AWESOMELY AWESOME romance story! Plus you can speak like, what, seven languages? INCLUDING Japanese? I can barely speak English properly and forget Japanese! And your name! It's like someone took my two favorite characters and smushed them together! (Hahaha) learning all this cool stuff about the author just makes me love this story more! Keep up the great work! I'll always keep reading! (Not trying to be creepy or anything)
| neko-utau chapter 18 . 7/6/2013
IT WAS AWESOME! Just wondering is there some hinashika at the end? And it was kind of cute that Shikamaru was helping her out. Keep writing!
| Bottomless Pit of EMOTIONS chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Really good story! You portrayed Ino like how I think of her. Hinata is a little OOC but it's ok! Naruto and Sasuke are asses, but at least Sasuke actually likes her! :D