Reviews for A New Start
theHuntgoeson chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
This is really good! I like your new team, and the scenes of Gene seeing Alex in the mirror, and of Alex breaking her heart in the Railway Arms, are so moving. Now Keats is back, Gene needs Alex with him to fight evil. Please write more.
Eleantris chapter 4 . 3/11/2011
Haha, a unicorn called Gene... he will be pleased. :P Brilliant chapter!

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Triple Integral chapter 4 . 3/11/2011
This story is great so far! You're doing brill - keep it up. I can't wait for more :)
Jazzola chapter 4 . 3/11/2011
I like the sound of a unicorn called Gene, actually xD

This was great! Commiserations with not being able to save :L Looking forward to more!

Jazzola :)
Jazzola chapter 3 . 3/8/2011
Ooh... *traps Keats in net* There we go, now I can draw on your forehead and warn everyone.

This is great! I love the little convo with Gene and Carly. I like it! Thanks for posting :)

Jazzola :)
Eleantris chapter 3 . 3/8/2011
Noooo! Not Keats! If you're bringing him back, you have to bring Alex back...pretty please? Hehe, sorry, do what you like...I'm just being whiny. :D I love this story, it's brilliant, and I really, really like Carly! I look forward to more.

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Jazzola chapter 2 . 3/7/2011
Can I call him Leapfrog? The unicorn... Just a little warning of what you shouldn't play with him.

This is great! I like it :) More soon?

Jazzola :)
Eleantris chapter 2 . 3/7/2011
Oh well, better contribute to the growing unicorn population then! :D This was a brilliant chapter, I love the idea of Gene getting Alex apparitions - that's lovely, and I've instantly warmed to Carly. I can't wait for more!

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Eleantris chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
This is a brilliant start! I love the unique way you've introduced us all to the characters, and the hints at Galex. I'm hoping there will be a return from Alex, and Galex, to come? *puppy dog eyes* Either way, I look forward to reading more!

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EightEminus chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Like! Keep writing. Great from Gene's POV, especially as we know more than him (iphones, radios, etc).