Reviews for A New Start |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! I like your new team, and the scenes of Gene seeing Alex in the mirror, and of Alex breaking her heart in the Railway Arms, are so moving. Now Keats is back, Gene needs Alex with him to fight evil. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, a unicorn called Gene... he will be pleased. :P Brilliant chapter! X D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great so far! You're doing brill - keep it up. I can't wait for more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the sound of a unicorn called Gene, actually xD This was great! Commiserations with not being able to save :L Looking forward to more! Jazzola :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh... *traps Keats in net* There we go, now I can draw on your forehead and warn everyone. This is great! I love the little convo with Gene and Carly. I like it! Thanks for posting :) Jazzola :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo! Not Keats! If you're bringing him back, you have to bring Alex back...pretty please? Hehe, sorry, do what you like...I'm just being whiny. :D I love this story, it's brilliant, and I really, really like Carly! I look forward to more. X D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I call him Leapfrog? The unicorn... Just a little warning of what you shouldn't play with him. This is great! I like it :) More soon? Jazzola :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh well, better contribute to the growing unicorn population then! :D This was a brilliant chapter, I love the idea of Gene getting Alex apparitions - that's lovely, and I've instantly warmed to Carly. I can't wait for more! X D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a brilliant start! I love the unique way you've introduced us all to the characters, and the hints at Galex. I'm hoping there will be a return from Alex, and Galex, to come? *puppy dog eyes* Either way, I look forward to reading more! X D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like! Keep writing. Great from Gene's POV, especially as we know more than him (iphones, radios, etc). |