Reviews for Primeval
SadNLonely14 chapter 8 . 5/29
uuuuugggghhh this story is so unrealistic but it's okay ya know the way u put imagery in this is just amazing but yeah like I said an okay story because of the excessive repetitiveness but yea ur Kool tho nothing against you
Granada chapter 13 . 2/27
I absolutely love this fic! Your portrayal of the beast was so good that I actually wanted him more than Bb at the end. I wish that I could read more ravenxbeast action. Congratulations! I devoured this ff
vysirez chapter 5 . 2/4
I was going to leave a longer review, but the story is finished, not much point. Just have to say that Raven is one of the most powerful titans, so your portrayal of her here doesn't seem true to character. It's like you have to ignore all her abilities so the Beast can dominate her. "Do not think you can fight against me and win" Really? Ultimately Raven is completely out of BBs league power wise, so this whole plot doesn't work.
xxcandylover23xx chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
Lol four or five? I see thirteen chapters lml. This is very good.
iFeelPrettyXD chapter 13 . 4/20/2017
Thank you for this
Kaywoe chapter 13 . 2/28/2017
Nice story
Kaywoe chapter 10 . 2/28/2017
Why didn't she say it back ️
Kaywoe chapter 7 . 2/28/2017
Don't cry raven
Kaywoe chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
Their fussing
Kaywoe chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
Ok she's jealous
Kaywoe chapter 2 . 2/28/2017
That beast is malevolent
Kaywoe chapter 2 . 2/28/2017
She's a agitation brings me many vexations
Kaywoe chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Did she just call him an animal
MrsManninq chapter 13 . 10/18/2016
loved it i like how you sticked to the characters personality i feel like thats how they would really handle it, if it were real. great job.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/4/2016
I absolutely love this fic . I've read this over and over so many times and every time it's still as interesting as the first time . I do wish I could have read how they broke it to the team about their relationship and the team's reaction though.
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