|Reviews for Crimson|
| P2tbAnimeGirl chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
The attention to emotion and character is flawless. You truly captured the feelings and thoughts of Artemis perfectly. The backstory and the emotions it brings Artemis is brilliant. Your writing style is vivid, coming to life and adding to the portrayal of Artemis’s character while reading. This was exceptionally well written and deep.
| soraskybeauty chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
So well written such a great interpretted bactstory and personally i think this must be her fear espcially with her being an archer like you wrote, she wouldn't always see the blood when she fires an arrow, so descriptive i actually feel a bit ill now but it was so vivid.
| YJ TT chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
AW! *U* Love this so far! *U* Rock on! This is amazing! *U* Awesome work! *U* Poor Artemis, being so afraid of blood, but this actually fits Art pretty darn well! *U* Love it! Rock on! *U*
| Thy of Mystery chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
You got the effects blood have on people really well!
| KickTheBucket chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I LOVED THIS!
You really did the Hemophobia good! :)
Not only was it believable, you also did a bit of Artemis' background. This could be her actual fear!
I also like how you didn't say her name until the end. Of course, I knew, but I pretended not to :)
I hope to read more awesome stuff like this soon!
Thanks for participating in my challenge! :D
| Illucida chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Hey, great job! Your use of descriptive words was fantastic-it painted a clear, grotesque image. This is an interesting back story combined with the prompted phobia. Lovely work!
| Hezpeller chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
nice little story, it was interesting!
Hope to see more from you!
| asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjklasd chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Awesome. I like how you tied elements from the universe together, shedding a little more background on Artemis' life (and how her mother ended up in that wheelchair) and gives us a small piece of the puzzle of why she's doing what she does. I found it interesting that you focused on the /scent/ of blood, although, come to think of it, I think that would be more nauseating than the sight of it.
I thought this was a great interpretation!
| ygirl87 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
this was a very GOOD story it makes a ton of sence. :) 10 10 10