Loved this chapter best... the whole Merlin knowing which problems need addressing!

I like the way they are the BBC characters, but with the legend's stoty.

This is one of the very best suggestions of the wider picture of the countries around Camelot and the destination of all-Albion to fight the invaders, but Arthur losing every thing because of the obsession with the Holy Grail.

Arthur seems the only one who isn't quite in charactor; over worried about Merlin at first. He does now need to be dealing with the chaos after Morgana so that will change his priorities!

I'm sad Gwen doesn't remember what she saw... but I haven't finished your story yet!

This was a really great story. I zipped through it so quickly.

so much love, so well written.

i hate seeing them suffer like this, but i love gwen/merlin friendship soooooo much that i had to finish :)

["My lady, it has been and always will be an honour to serve," he said with a slight bow, then he turned to go.] Uh oh, the future Merlin and Gwen saw is coming true... I guess it’s inevitable, then.

This was such a great story! The plot was great, and I think you did a good job at keeping everyone in character. Kudos to you! _

Wow. The entire conversation between Merlin and Arthur was excellent. I’d say it’s pretty realistic. I really liked it when Merlin was directly asking Arthur what he would do if someone had to use magic to save Camelot. Very sneaky... ;) And the part where Merlin was giving Arthur advice on military matters was great, too!

This was such a great chapter. I’m so sad that it’s almost over, though!

Great story and definitely deserving a sequel. There are a few loose ends, such as why Alvarr was found where he was, how did he know about Merlin's ability to see the future in the Crystal Cave etc...

JM

Wow... this story was so good! It was kind of depressing but then, that's the legend right. I love your writing, everything was great. I like that it ended on a happy note though, thanks for writing!

What the hay! Homework knocks me out for a week and suddenly there's 9 chapters! Oh YAAA

fantastic story, both sorry that there nothing to wait for, yet happy at the ending though i do hope you write a sequel! :D

That was beautiful. One of the most beautiful Merlin fics I've ever read. Well done. Thanks for sharing your story.

I haven't much time, but I did want to say that this was wonderful! I will certainly be looking forward to any more writing you do, and between now and then I'll be reading the other stories you've already written. Keep up the great work! :D

CJ

That was a very nice note to end this story on. :) This whole story was written very well, and it makes me all the more anxious to see how the series plays out the inevitable legends it's based on.

Very well done. I thouroughly enjoyed this story. :) Keep up the great work!

(( Claire ))

That was a great ending to a great story. Even though Gwen doesn't remember the visions, her instincts do...so, hopefully...she won't cheat on Arthur? (*crosses fingers) But anyways, good job! I thoroughly enjoyed it. :-)

Very well done! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and especially the fact that there wasn't some tidy little happy ending(though I do love those as well). Thank you for sharing.