Reviews for You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow the planning goes from even before Bella was born! What a painful but useful spirit walk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m enjoying rereading all your stories. Mirror Mirror was so much fun I decided to start from the beginning again! I love the differences in your stories compared to the books. What’s your thinking behind Alice being unable to grow hair when your vampires usually can? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of got disappointed for having them be humans again. I was hoping for an eternal life of chaos and happiness for them. -sigh- that's why I'm not the author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has by far been the best story with a Peter and Bella pairing. i hope you get the inspiration to finish the story. This is one of my favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I just finished reading this again and it is still one of my favorites. I’m glad all worked out in the end and all the bad vampires were killed. Wow and Bella and Peter had three boys which was cool even though I thought they would have more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saved my comment till the end. This story was great! I almost had a fit, when they separated Bella, and Peter. I'm glad they found each other again. Though I'm more into the Jasper/Bella pairing, I enjoyed this. Please do more of J & B, or P & B. I'll definitely read them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your stories are awesome! I just have to remember not to take a drink while reading. Lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, is Emily a captive too? You wrote in this chapter that the other women stared curiously at them, “especially at Emily who was Native America like themselves,” but then Emily wasn’t mentioned again. I thought it was just Bella, Heidi, and Molly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an interesting way to end this story. Thank you for all your hard work creating it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this fanfiction so many times and love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god this story was so absolutely beautiful, amazing, excellent and addicting! My absolute favorite story! I LOVE all your stories. Please Keep Writing for us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m absolutely addicted to this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so damn awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its a really great storyi love the writing, the sex, everything!... except the last 7 chapters. Im going to pretend they all lived sparkly ever after |
![]() ![]() aradon i have the spritual portal |