Reviews for The Calm
WeFallForever chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
This was really powerful; I loved all the intense emotion you used. Great job!
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
well written, great juxtaposition between title and content! xx
rpfangirljr chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Another goid beginning to a story. I would love to see this move on into a full story one day. I have a lot of questions that need to be answered now.

Good luck!
My name is Seren Dipity chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
That was intense and bitter and full of emotions for only 500 words!
MissWinkles chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I love this story. Such vitriol and anger, well written. :)
slightly tilted chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Okay, I obviously have issues because I love this! This is one that I would love to see expanded, lots of potential here. Course, in my heart of hearts, I'd still want an HEA one way or the other.

Thanks for sharing!
GLee68 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I soooo don't want to get between Edward and his revenge plans!
N.K Olesen chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
:O. this is like that fic "How to turn a straight guy gay" ... hmm.. im confused. but this is good :)
one of eddie's girls chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Ouch a pissed off Edward and a cheating Jasper.
jadediamond chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
This is a very good chapter, there has to be more i want to see some revenge lol.
sydvalentine chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Sounds like this Jasper needs to learn a lesson! Yep...! Bring it on Edward! LOL!
daffy410 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I hate reading Jasper's character in a negative way because he's my favorite character specially when teamed with Edward. That being said, I'm very disappointed with Jasper in this story.
Robpfan chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Wow... this one expresses a certain level of hate... I'm fairly sure that's what you were aiming for but if it wasn't it should have been...

Take care