Reviews for Errosion
Not a Fan chapter 37 . 2/21
Just skimming the chapters and this story is way too sadistic and contrived to be enjoyable.
yukio87 chapter 37 . 2/4
What Karai is doing to Raph? Where's Leo? Leo and Raph were together in the last chapter...what happened to them? How long until some good thing happens to them? And where are Donnie and Mikey? Are they ok? I'll be expeting for more...Good luck and take care
BubblyShell22 chapter 37 . 2/4
Man, this isn't good. I hope they can rescue Raph and all be together again. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 36 . 2/4
Awesome chapter and I don't blame Mikey for his outburst because he's just as scared as Donnie is but he's doing his best to sound as positive and hopeful as he can be. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Leo-TheHunter chapter 37 . 2/4
Omg UR BACK AND THIS CHAPTER IS SSSOOOOO GOOD
Guest chapter 37 . 2/4
Oh no, psycho scientists that dint belong to the Foot are a thousand times worse.
Guest chapter 36 . 8/2/2016
Scribe-of-Turesa not logged in but:?ahhhhhhh
Leo-TheHunter chapter 36 . 8/2/2016
Dang...just silence.i have nothing to say
BluberyJamSam chapter 6 . 8/2/2016
HOLY S**T!? WTF LEPRECHAUN! I MEAN LEO!?
BluberyJamSam chapter 5 . 8/2/2016
oh god! he's gonna do something stupid isn't he?
BluberyJamSam chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
wow..
Guest chapter 36 . 8/2/2016
Stupid emotional moves between the two of them, but even more stupidity from Mikey for leaving and putting himself out there to be caught.
yukio87 chapter 36 . 8/1/2016
When things are getting worse and worse now Donnie and Mikey need to be together and save their brothers but Mikey ran away from Donnie because he couldn't do anything right...So what's gonna happen with Leo and Raph? What is Donnie gonna do to get Mikey back and then go to rescue Leo and Raph? They don't know Raph was taken and now he is with Leo in a very bad situation...I wanna read more. Please try to update soon. Good luck and take care
SleepingSeeker chapter 35 . 6/22/2016
Sharp tension throughput this chapter. Was holding my breath as I read. Poor Leo.

Side note, FF must be screwing up - all the line breaks are gone in this chapter. You may want to go back and add them in again, to break up the blocks of text, but it certainly doesn't hurt your story as is, either.
Guest chapter 35 . 6/12/2016
*screaming* Please update soon! I'm dying inside
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