|Reviews for Stabbed|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15
hey i Think you are doing a Amazing job keep it up
| gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/22
Wouah quel finish.
| crazzyredhead chapter 1 . 2/1
i wish you would update and not have this as a one shot really liked the story and would have loved to seen more to it.
| Rezzu-MJ chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Kami, Gohan's so dead! You should make a sequel, I wanna see Videl lecturing him! Btw, isn't Tao supposed to be like an ant for Gohan? Was going Super even necessary?
Well, I understand that you needed to get Gohan "badly" hurt, but transforming was a little too much. Anyways, it goes to favorites!
| FINISH STORY chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
ANOTHER CHAPTER! THAT WAS AWESOME! I WANNA SEE HER REACTION!
IF YOU DON'T MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER, I'LL DIE OF SORROW BECAUSE SUCH A GOOD STORY WAS NEVER COMPLETED! THIS IS FREAKIN, LIKE, I CAN'T EXPLAIN HOW, HOW, UGHHHH! IT CAN'T BE EXPLAINED IN WORDS! JUST FINISH IT!:O
| Rebmul chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
love to see videl rip him a new one
| Sofia Volpina chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
It's quite hard to imagine a super sayian getting even scratched by a sword, let alone pierced through. But the story is sooo well written, taht I don't even want to dwell on such details. Another detail, very unimportant one, but still, would be that the formula for nitric acid would be something you'd be asked about in the 8th grade, much rather than in high school. (That would imply he's about 14 years old, merely a kid; and I suppose your Gohan is somewhat older, around the age of 17-18, am I right? ;)) But, as i said, that's obviously, completely unimportant. :))) Anyway, back to the essentials... awesome one-shot. Loved it how you managed to pack so many details, plot development, and intensity in less than 3k words. Oh, and with regard to your writing style, I think it's comletely useless to mention that it absolutely rocks! :P
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Two questions. One: Isn't Tao like fucking fodder compared to the Z-FIghters? Why would Gohan have to go Super? Two: Doesn't Super Saiyan make the skin like fucking bullet proof?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Gohan you are so very VERY screwed XD
| Angelina McCarthy chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
| GreenDrkness chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Freaking awesome nough said
Keep on the writes
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Videl is going to KILL Gohan!
| DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
A pretty cool one shot. It's a cliche idea- Mercenary Tao, not Gohan supposedly dying- but it's still done pretty well.
I was relatively sad when Tao 'killed' Gohan, but the pure, sheer awesomeness that is the scene immediately prior more than made up for it. Gohan /actually/ murdered him in cold blood. He legitimately drove Gohan to the point of murder, something very few can do.
I enjoyed it! Awesome one shot!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
she couldn't just die?
| lancecomwar chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Love this oneshot. Dark and angsty for most of it, but then funny at the end.
I would like for a new chapter, but it's probably best to leave it as it is now- any more would deviate from the original story. Best to just leave as is. Oh well, I like.