|Reviews for Over the Edge|
| Airy89 chapter 13 . 11/18/2013
Omg...such an awesome fic
I really like it
| fangirl85 chapter 8 . 5/19/2013
Hey! Have to be honest here, your story would probably have appealed to me more if I were in my teenage years and/or without tons of fanfics already read under my belt. As is I'll explain what I liked more and what less. The less is nagging me so I'll open with that. First, Kaname. As a character there are some irrefutable traits that are clearly associated with him: charismatic, calculating, confident. He's used to getting what he wants either by his natural appeal or status as pureblood. Here I found Kaname to be very OOC. Indecisive, flustered easily, lacks charm and a bit petulant at times.
**spoiler** needed in order to explain: Chasing Zero, sleeping with Cara, then again chasing Zero, suddenly deciding that its time to leave for good, but no he cant since Zero has just asked him to come with them to the zoo, again Kaname wants it to be only Yuuki but when he's kissing Zero and she interprets she's a bother that needs to be removed. **End Spoiler**
I just don’t get this erratic behavior. I tried to buy it but frankly Kaname is elegance incarnate and even if the situation with Zero is one big mess, he'll see it through, with less drama, less wavering and I don’t see him thinking badly of Yuuki in the process. Zero as a character is way too emotional and moody for my tastes. Wanting to die, not wanting and come again, he drove me nuts at times. Zero is a fighter; I don’t see him accepting such a fate, without knowing why, without fighting back.
I'll quote a part that felt very contradicting: "You are the only one I ever want to love like that. Cara is just a toy", follows by Kaname referring to Zero as a precious trinket. she's a toy, he's a trinket.. really?
Some parts of the fic are great and almost capture the magic of real love but it falls flat with immature reaction or situations that felt a bit high school-ish. Though I believe that if I were younger, your fic would easily have been added to my favs, but plenty of fics passed that bridge. So unfortunately for me, even though I do sincerely want to finish this, Im stopping at the "Yuuki find out" scene. The fic needs more maturity.
I'll conclude by saying that even though this fic wasn’t a success with me, I still think your writing is great and I really wish to read more from you when you've developed and experienced more. Thanks for sharing!
| Akatsuki Fatale chapter 13 . 4/25/2013
I seriously wanted to savagely murder Kaname during the whole Cara scene. The emotions I got from this were so real And the lovey dovey time 3 So cute! I can imagine their ceremony being more "You may now bite the bride/groom" and they like..both bite each other at the same time instead of kissing..I fantasize quite a lot..but anyway! I love it o
| Wyomia Richtrhofen chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
hello..., evanthe here to review...you know, it makes my heart ache for unknow reason... You have done a good job for this chapter if I should say...
| BlacKaZeBlue chapter 13 . 12/26/2012
I loved every sentence of this wonderfully written story. I'm really glad you stuck with it to the end:)
| Vanillamoo chapter 13 . 11/12/2012
Awwww gosh.. this was such a nice fanfic i feel like crying now i love it!
| ami chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
the first two chapters were good...
but this one really raised my expectations...
let's see what's next
| sKyLaR KnIgHt chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This was a great start :)
| rosaikibu chapter 13 . 3/12/2012
well i gotta say this is a good one...
though it started kinda slow with all the going-out scenes...i actually started enjoying it from Chapter 8 onwa!rds
and your ending of the story is really beautiful
keep up the good work!
| Aym chapter 11 . 3/9/2012
only one word describes this...awsome
| zeroandkanamelover99 chapter 13 . 3/3/2012
i love it oh wait i said that about three times already
| zeroandkanamelover99 chapter 11 . 3/3/2012
this is the most amazing story ever
| bluerose-28 chapter 13 . 2/26/2012
I love this story so much:D its so romantic :3
| 3 bug chapter 13 . 1/28/2012
This story... has got to be... THE BEST kaname x zero fic. that i have EVER read!
I loved the plot, how it was written, and the smut ;) Everything was really well written!
Thanks for writing it! I absolutely loved it! :D
| Nao Takumi chapter 13 . 1/14/2012
I absolutely loved the story! You rock!
Loved the character development and the sequence of events. It was simply awesome to read your story.
Best of luck for future projects, looking forward to them :D