Reviews for The Revenge of the Bartowski
tss1950 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Solid first chapter. I like your insight into what Sarah was feeling while on a stakeout. For a moment I thought that I had a itches all over my body. The last paragraph was genuinely surprising and made me laugh. By the way Beckman is at her most scary when holding a rocket launcher that is bigger than she is :)

Keep up the good work.
atcDave chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
really glad to see the sequel finally! Exciting first chapter, and a great re-entry into your AU.
DarkJackall chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
You did it again! Damn good job!
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