Reviews for Survival of the Fittest
Drag0nst0rm chapter 16 . 3/1/2016
I adored this story. So much h/c, so many feels, such great writing.
I instantly fell in love with the idea of the undercover au you mentioned, but I can't find it on your livejournal. Help, please?
sopmire chapter 16 . 8/3/2014
So love re-reading this story/series! Thanks for making my weekend. :)
Guest chapter 16 . 9/16/2013
Very nice fluffy feely ending to this series.
Congrats to finishing it _
Gracealma chapter 16 . 3/18/2013
Excellent story. I love Tony as a Sentinal. I hope you can do more stories on Tony's Tribe?
Unseen Watcher chapter 16 . 3/2/2013
Ah, back in this genre at last. Wonderful. heh. Here's to Gibbs intimidation. A truly great storyline. Whatever, and whenever you post another fic I'm sure I'll enjoy that too. Thanks!
Maunzeli chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Don't really buy the whole Sentinel thing-which makes my buy-in to your plot even more impressive.
Niwaki chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
fantastic ending
sekmarcspn chapter 16 . 4/24/2012
Excellent story, fantastic AU! You did very well dealing with issues leading to a working partnership and all the angst involved. Hope to see more in this 'verse someday soon!
Choas Babe chapter 16 . 4/17/2012
The only thing I'm sad about in this story is that you killed the dog and not Carlin. Seriously. On the balance, I'll take the dog.

Other than that, I kept reading so I wouldn't be left hanging. Much better coming at a story like this at the end.
lizrat66 chapter 16 . 11/30/2011
Have really enjoyed this whole series of stories. Great writing and interesting plot. All people in character, absoloutely love Tony, one day it might get through to him that they all love and care for him and tht he deserves it.
GSister chapter 16 . 11/26/2011
I must say that I do like this AU. You've done a great job keeping them all in character - Gibbs's, Abby's, & Ducky's voices are especially easy to hear.

There have been a few confusing instances of scene changes - you may want to try to add an extra space when you post to clear those up in the future. Just a thought.

And if you need further ideas for future stories in the NCIS/Sentinal world - I've been wondering about their spirit animals. Actually, I thought that the dog in this story was going to be Tony's Spirit Guide at the beginning - and he just didn't realize that no one else could see him. But then Gibbs could - and I still thought it could be possible... after all - everyone has always said that Tony was Gibbs's loyal St. Bernard...

It should be interesting to see if you add more stories to this AU. Great job so far.
ferryboat George chapter 16 . 10/19/2011
Delightful story as always, I hope you get inspired with more of this universe in the future :) I loved the bit about geeks and assassins hanging streamers EG
Belker chapter 16 . 10/12/2011
Hey there, SA! It's been a while since I visited your page and your fantastic stories, but now I've finally finished Survival. And what a wonderful story it was! Perfect action, perfect angst, perfect humour and - most important - perfect GibbsTony moments. I just love your style and you have me so impressed with your writing. I do hope you'll conjure up some more Sentinel fics because I love them! :)

Atsuyuri-sama chapter 16 . 10/7/2011
I've never seen Sentinel (which sucks, 'cause now this fic-series has me wanting to know the second half of your inspiration), but I LOVE this Tony-Sentinel and Gibbs-Guide thing! It's so well-written, and your grasp of the characters is amazing: I can't tell you how many times I've read a line in any of this three-part series, and HEARD that character as thoguh I was watching an NCIS episode!

As a suggestion, maybe you could write a one-shot where the team sees Tony experience a spike? I think it would be interesting to see the various responses (and poor Tony aside, I would like to see a spike from his perspective, and not just a Gibbs-in-the-rain concllusion). Just a thought.

Also, I can't wait for your child!fic... You've got another fan of your writing in me, that's for sure! I'll be keeping an eye out.


PS - YOu might want to mark Wrath and Survival of the Fitest as 'complete'; the story stats makes it look incomplete, and some people who would otherwise read those might avoid them based on teh simple fact that they don't look done yet when looking at the summary.
Laura-trekkie chapter 16 . 9/22/2011
Nice to see Carlin getting a face full of Gibbs. At least he seemed willing to keep quiet for reasons beyond saving his own skin, which hopefully means he will actually keep quiet.

Loved the ending scene with the team relaxing together and Tony getting his sense of taste back just in time for pizza.
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