Reviews for Scrapbook!
Angelfish369 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
You are absolutely crazy and I love it! Tai in a wedding dress...*snicker*
Takato the dreamer chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
Such a sweet chap XD. Thanks for letting me read before!
Elegon chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
They're so cute as kids! I love reading your story! Keep up the excellent work!
helen ess chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
Oh wow. This was really brilliant. I think it's so lovely how you can rewrite their past so effortlessly. I have no problem with you playing around with them as characters because you make them so genuin in the process. You writing was, as always, excellent and I can feel my heart swelling with your descriptions, always lovingly constructed and delicious to read. I am tired too, I don't think I have any more words left in me, but this was excellent and it has made my morning. thank you MrGooseyMoose. x
the upward glance chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Hehe! That was rather adorable my dear Moose! : D Gosh, you sure portrayed children very well, and captured that youthful innocence and cuteness! Lil Tai n Matt were beyond adorable! That was a really clever n cute idea. I liked it a lot! Having their first meeting and all, with Tai running over poor Matt! And then Matt crying and all, hehe. Anyway, I found that really enjoyable and sweet. Great job at recreating childhood, while portraying those two accurately as kids, lol, I could really see that's how they were at that age. Sorry, this review is so small...but it's late, and I can't quite express what I liked and how much, but trust me I really did! : ) Can't wait for more buddy! XOXO
KeruKeru chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
:D Awww! This was so cute! I kept picturing Tai like he was at the begining of Digimon the Movie, all small and cute. XD And I can only imagine what Matt was like a five year old. :3 Anyway, I really liked this chapter, it transported me back to my own chidhood when I got this red battery powered Jeep, it was the coolest thing ever! :D I was like 6 and everyone wanted to play with it.

I'm still waiting on the first kiss chapter and I also thought of another idea for a chapter! :D How about one from their first date? That'd be so sweet. :3 They're just suggestions though, you don't have to write them.

Update soon! :D
the upward glance chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Ahahahaha! xD That was so funny! Especially the beginning banter. I love the idea you have, reminiscing over recovered pictures of their life together. It's really cute and touching : ) I didn't expect though for the memories to be this amusing/bizarre-in-a-good-way! xD I was like "o_o W-Wait, a wedding dress...TAI, in a wedding dress? ...xD!" Lol, that was priceless. Yet, there was a touching sentiment behind the silliness, Tai's sadness over not being able to have what most couples have. And I loved how Yama laughed his ass of, yet still comforted his boyfriend. I mean, who wouldn't howl at that situation? xD But anyway, there was so much humor to this piece, and so much to rave about, but I shan't take up too much space. ; ) Again, I really enjoyed your writing. It's so expressive, and has such flair. And you have a great attention to detail, and a knack for humor. Rarely do I smile and giggle so much a when I read your work : ) It's a great feeling. Anyway, I love the way you write and portray this pairing, and I look forward to your next update, whenever that may be. I'm quite patient : )
Dragonisonpermanethiatus chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Ok, despite my crap and vague nature of reviewing with random positive waving arms I’m going to try to review this well.

First of all credit must be given to the opening title, it sets the scene for a really sweet story right from the off.

The content of it all was done really well. You may have no confidence to what you write but you should. I think with the intro before the flashback it would be really easy to get bogged down and boring but you cut through it really well. What’s more you have a story outside the scrapbook, not just some lame back-story. You’ve put effort into every part of this and it really shows.

Also some of your lines are just bloody amazing “feelings of guilt brush against his face” it’s really vivid and captivating

“feeling utterly, positively, astronomically perplexed” that’s just good writing, and a great use of astronomically haha

“"N-next thing I…I knew…I…big dress…and…ice cream…and…"” That made me laugh and think awwww. It’s quite possibly my favourite sentence ever too.

What I love about your fics is the interplay of the characters, honestly (and I’ve read a fair few) I’ve never found any that make me smile half as much. I love the jokey atmosphere you give them and the real feelings of affection beneath it all.

I’m liking the orange camera for some reason. It was a nice little ‘paying attention to detail’ quirk you’re good at.

And who doesn’t love ice cream ;]

Frankly I couldn’t begin to imagine how to make it any better, except adding more of course ;] .So yeah, it’s a fantastic start and I can only wait on tenterhooks for more. Fantastic work moosey ]
Elegon chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
helen ess chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Ah Mr Goosey Moose! I have missed you terribly! :) This is an AMAZING idea for a fic! It's just so perfect and I loved every second of it! Come on how is it fair that one person is so good at this stuff! For one thing your characters are just perfect, the way they interact with each other is just fabulous and you can see the tenderness and caring behind the jovial dialogue. The picture story itself was beautiful, I hope they are all going to be this cute, as well as maybe a few heart wrenching ones (how can we deny it, you write them well too! haha). I am upset you are going to hold out on us until summer though! Too much time between your updates does make them even more enjoyable when they turn up but I can't lie and say I don't miss your presence in my inbox! Have a wonderful few weeks, enjoy England's unseasonable sunny weather, but don't forget us fanficers and our need for a juicy MrGooseyMoose update! much love :D xxx
Takato the dreamer chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Awww! I always miss your fics! -GLOMPS- XD

your awesome XD Great fic, and an awesome idea, i wonder where you got it from :P:P But its awesome XD Great job :D

Thanks for the dedication :D Your awesome!

And remember... theres more to updating than making new fics :P
KeruKeru chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
OMG! THAT WAS SO CUTE! X3 You should do a flashback of their first kiss! :D That'd be even cuter! X3

Update soon!
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