Reviews for Young Love
manuelmusical14 chapter 1 . 2/22
I can easily picture the two in a scene like this. Tommy does not seem that bad of a person
xCaligula chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I liked it a lot, but it could either have more description and be longer, or take out some description to make it a shorter vignette. Also, keep in mind this is 1912 when typing the dialogue; some seemed a little modern. Otherwise, I think it was great!