|Reviews for Through Another's Eyes|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
I can't help but say thank you for noticing
| Chikni Chameli The Second chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Wow. That was so good. The fact that you wrote it from EURYTION's point of view is very, very commendable. Not a lot of people would think of doing that. And I also liked it that your writing style kind of changed with the person. And I also just loved the way you saw the Aphrodite-Ares relationship and how she influenced him and all that.
I found a flaw, though. In the second chapter, Eurytion's POV, I felt that that long lecture Annabeth gave Percy about her caring for him and all that was OOC. Even in TLO she was quite hesitant to express her feelings so boldly and outrightly (e.g :- refer to the part wherein he trades the sand dollar for support from the rivers).
But all in all, great fics. I would love to read Percabeth from other points of view, too. Update soon. Keep writing!
- Chikni Chameli The Second
| omgromance chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
All I can say is this is spot on and I want more and very soon! Loved it!
| flashdash411 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
| 4blueeyes9 chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
great chapter! could you write one in Zoe Nightshade's P.O.V.?
| KHLostEmpress chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
Ah, Calypso...such a sad tale there, but it's nice that she was so thankful to Percy for releasing her and not really resentful to Annabeth for taking him away. I really loved it!
As for chapter lengths...if it doesn't really bother you, just write the chapters as long as they need to be. If they end up 1000 or 4000 it doesn't really matter!
Good luck with your tours and update soon!
| Oblivious.Day'Dreamer chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
Yeah, I may just bombard you with reviews. Your writing is amazing! The details and feelings and words you use is just incredible. Hope you knew that! (please update...)
| Oblivious.Day'Dreamer chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
No one ever writes about this son of Ares, I had to think about him before I remembered who he was. But, I REALLY like this idea, seeing Percy and Annabeth through others eyes. Its adorable.
One suggestion/constructive criticism (use it or ignore it, doesn't hurt me, totally up to you...): The ending on this chapter was kind of weak..I get that he wants to go and be more like Ares son, instead of all lovey-dovey. Its just not as strong as it could be.
| ramonaboat chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I think I already told you about that I really like the concept of Percabeth through other people's opinion. And I liked that this chapter was about Calypso. I'm glad she accepted Percabeth in the end, since they were clearly meant for each other. (muahahah).
Again, you gave us a heart-warming, well written fanfic :)
Thumbs up on all my thumbs! (hahahaha)
-Stand, Bow, Bye!
| NoLongerInUse555 chapter 4 . 6/16/2011
Hi! I was just going through my favourite stories and came across this one. There's one flaw in your logic, if D gets the least number of reviews one week and you only update the others your never going to get more reviews for D because people usually only review what had been recently updated and it's very rare to get a review if you haven't updated. I really like this story so please don't stop it! Update another chapter, you'll get more reviews and the ongoing cycle will continue! :D PLEASE!
| HeyItsRandom chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
Please update! I love it! xxx
| Quillin0330 chapter 3 . 4/5/2011
This is great:) update please!
| Everything Has Changed chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
Please update soon
| ramonaboat chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
You should really keep going with this. I like the concept of how it's not through Percabeth's opinion, but of how others think of how mushy they are. lol. I hope you plan to update anytime soon. :)
| justagirlwithideas chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
I actually really enjoyed this story, it was really fresh and fun to read. I commend you for using the POVs of fic-neglected characters, it adds something intriguing and new to the story. You had a couple spelling and grammatical errors, but that's not a big deal. Besides, authors in real life have editors to catch stuff like that :) Great job.