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Chronos guardian chapter 11 . 4/21
Great story line but the ending felt me feeling some kind of way. Watanuki was a bit harsh wasn't he.
levysbookshelf chapter 11 . 3/1
I really enjoyed this story. The plot was great but I do feel a little bad for Subaru that was kind of a bitch slap for him.
Uchiha Salad chapter 11 . 2/3
Yesssss This story was amazing! 8D Thank you for writing this, because you've truly made my day. I've been swamped with projects and my grade was on a decline just from stress alone. Thank you for this, I think I'll be alright now.
Lady Minato chapter 11 . 1/14
This was written and finished in 2011. Do I care? NOPE STILL REVIEWING.

THIS FANFICTION WAS SIMPLY AMAZING AND I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF. Oh my goodness the way you portrayed Watanuki was just too much for my heart to handle, it was amazing. I loved every bit of it. There was so much about him that just made me adore him. His possessive attitude, manipulative, vain, just EVERYTHING I wished every uke would be. Oh my goodness. I loved their relationship. The fact that Doumeki had such a fiery attitude and turned into almost a puppet afterwards. I love it so much. I can't stop saying how much I loved this.

I truly wish that you had another fic with Watanukis personality like this, but I've read your other and enjoy them just as much. you're an amazing writer. And I hope that even though it's 2015 you haven't stopped. It would be such a disappointment. Maybe one day I'll look and see you've created another story. Thank you for allowing me to enjoy such a well written story.

-Lady
CrimsonQueen24 chapter 11 . 5/21/2014
I loved it! It was a great idea and I'm impressed you wrapped it up so well. The story line was very interesting, I especially loved all the cameo's of other CLAMP works! Fantastic job. I'd love to read more of your works! I hope you write another xxxHolic fanfiction sometime soon! I just love them. Ever since I read Entangled I've been hooked on your writing!
joanne chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
This is one of my favorite stories ever, just came back to re-read it.
Le-Anime-fan chapter 11 . 6/3/2013
I love this!
P.S You may want to get used to screams, for I shall be opening your fan club as soon as I can...
P.P.S Please post more fics like this... *kyaaaaaaa!*
love it chapter 11 . 3/18/2013
damn! this is amazing! really good
GrimCharmer chapter 11 . 11/19/2012
awesome!_
LittleLamperouge chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Hi _

Um. Err - well basically, I've just finished reading this fic the whole through and...(is probably going to be shot by someone for saying this) I wasn't really a fan of some bits of this story tbh...

It's just I couldn't help but feel some of the characters were kinda OOC - Seishirou was I think for example, he isn't the type that gets outwardly obviously furious and swears and barks at people (even when Fuuma ripped Subaru's eye out in front of him), and even Watanuki (though I guess he's been around a whole while) seemed quite Yuuko-ish - especially the way you introduced him and the way he was /literally/ all over Doumeki from the off - that's...not really what Watanuki's like tbh...

I think Fuuma and Kamui probably would've done more as well, based on their personalities - but the story wasn't around them so fair enough I guess.

I think Watanuki was needlessly quite cruel to Subaru - Subaru hadn't done anything wrong, but yet he seemed to taunt him by dangling Doumeki in front of him and almost mocking him places, and then there's the ending which just seems like an extra (and...kinda needless imo) kick in the teeth...

The ending seemed a bit...I dunno, there were quite a few loose ends (?) or maybe I just managed to overlook it _; the Hunter Association split up, but what happened to everyone involved? What happened to Kamui and Fuuma and Seishirou? Did they all die...? Did you put Seiichiro and Subaru together btw? (Also putting him and Fuuma's dad in at the end seemed a bit random, it didn't really bring much to the plot or anything...)

And one last thing, while I'm thinking of it - the 'final battle' seemed a bit almost...anticlimatic :\, maybe I was distracted at the time, but apart from Seishirou getting injured and talking to Subaru, this 'great battle' - I almost missed it it over so quickly...

And the massacre of the Council people. That didn't fit with me either I'm afraid. I didn't like that, it seemed a bit cruel and unneccessary to kill ALL of them but three people...? Not sure I liked that side to Doumeki Watanuki tbh :P

I don't know - for the reasons above, (I mean, I liked the world you created and the general plotline) but there were aspects of it I didn't agree with and just kinda didn't fit with me.

But maybe that's just me being picky and pedantic etc. Maybe I'm just a sucker for "HAPPY ENDINGZ 4 EVRI1 XD!1!111" etc...:P

I haven't read Unnatural Light, but this was an original idea as far as I'm concerned and I liked the concept of it :)

(I'm sorry if I seem like a total bitch and this has managed to turn into a flame O_O if it has, it's totally unintentional - this is just my opinion on the story...)
Sachiel Angelo chapter 11 . 4/14/2012
At some point Kimihiro was too much like Yuuko. I remember he was quite like her at the end of the series, but never quite on the spot. I did enjoyed the story, but the ending kinda left me sad.
Sachiel Angelo chapter 5 . 4/14/2012
holy! Did Kimihiro just topped Doumeki!
thesleepless chapter 11 . 4/1/2012
it was a beautiful story :)

i love the idea of doumeki and watanuki being together forever.

i don't think that doumeki is being used by watanuki. it was his destiny to be with him, and it is not like his life were good before. forgetting his past might have been only for his own good after all the grief he withstood.

hope to read more stories like this in the future :)
Lockwyn Woodspire chapter 11 . 12/11/2011
I really liked this. You did a great job _

I haven't looked at your other stories yet so I don't know if you've already done it but I think it would be cool if you did Fai and Kurogane's story as pertains to the whole Traveler thing and how they met XD
oxogreenappleoxo chapter 11 . 11/20/2011
The story was absolutely brilliant! I loved it! XD

Your writing is beautiful and the way you wrote Watanuki is exactly the way I would imagine him to be after many years of being alive since he was already starting to show signs of it in the last few chapters of the manga. I felt a bit bad for Subaru. 40 years and he still couldn't get over Doumeki! D: I hope he decided to live the last few months of his life fully

Thank you for the wonderful story and all your hard work! XD
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