Reviews for What Started Out Good
Haro4 chapter 5 . 1/6
I like the struggle for Adahi to be a good father and combat his hate for taka makes it intresting
Warrior of The Forrest chapter 20 . 4/13/2014
I was boiling with rage at the end of this novel. I loved Scar in this story. I don't care if he was been the bad guy, I still loved him. I was angry about Ahadi. But, for some reason, I was boiling when Sarafina seduces the rogue. That should be Scar's cub! Excellent story!
Raischenzo chapter 20 . 1/4/2014
I loved this story, as I am a big fan of Scar. This could have all been avoided if one Ahadi loved Scar from the beginning and two if Scar didn't try to reject everybody even though I understand his reason for it
Guest chapter 20 . 12/9/2013
Scar is awesome
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 20 . 10/25/2013
This was a great story, even knowing the end didn't make it any easier. You did a fantastic job on it.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 18 . 10/25/2013
This was sad, Scar seems to have fully emerged.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 15 . 10/25/2013
Once Uru goes whats left of Taka will probably go with her. Pity that it came to this.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 13 . 10/25/2013
Zazu did deserve that.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 12 . 10/25/2013
Just when he realises what an idiot he has been. Can't say he didn't deserve some pain but definitely tragic and the beginning of something horrible.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 9 . 10/25/2013
Damn... this was good. I mean tragic and painful but good.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 8 . 10/25/2013
He really is, Mufasa sure was brave but it wasn't enough. I feel so sorry for Taka.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 6 . 10/25/2013
Sad and sweet in the same chapter.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 5 . 10/23/2013
Well he does have a point, extremely harsh and that last part was disturbing but they did break the rules.

Zazu was kind of in the right even if it probably won't do him any favours. Great chapter.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 4 . 10/22/2013
This will end badly.

Well... at least Ahadi showed some guilt induced affection. Mufasa and Taka seem to get on great for now.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
Poor Taka, poor Ed and poor Frita. Ahadi sure did a lot of damage in five minutes.

Ahadi really, really seems to hate his son but it seems he has other issues as well. So far he seems to care about Uru and Mufasa and that's about it.
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